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05:33:07 Cae, Blue

actually sick and tired of the bird watcher not dropping fethers despite my entire team having maxed dominance >:( what do you mean out of 3 bird men ive met, only one ran away??

05:08:07 the Yellow Pack

What is the temp outside?

To the Slaughter

05:02:30 Lamb

So cold I think if i even LOOK outside ill freeze to death and die forever

05:01:32 Rev

Cae
Depressing

05:00:51 Cae, Blue

thanks ^^

04:57:40 no. 1 swamp defender

Cae, thanks, hope you dsel better :))

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04:56:05 Mr palette guy

🧍I miss when it stayed hot during winter
I would give anything to be actively cooking in my bed instead of turning into frozen pork

04:56:04 Cae, Blue

i havent had positive pack happiness in years

04:55:46 Cae, Blue

ven, you look at me and then you notice a silhouette behind me... its master caven XD

ky, congrats omg!! im so happy for you!!
im good, might be coming down with some throat infection :( gonna try and see my doc today for it sobs

rev, i dont lmao

04:44:55 Rev

Cae
How do you keep your pack hapinees up?

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Amy
Don't mind me mass breeding to all your studs hahah

04:26:41 no. 1 swamp defender

Cae, congrats on the dom! I start the job I was talking about last week tomorrow!! Crazy to be a 9-5 girlie after 5 years of retail and hospitality lol. How are you? <3

04:25:50 ven

cae,
i aspire to have as much dominance as you one day

04:21:56 Cae, Blue

ky, how are you doing today, beloved?

04:21:39 Cae, Blue

Total Dominance: 60010

wild o.o

04:12:29 ven

any good name ideas?
-WP Click-

04:12:03 no. 1 swamp defender

hi Cae!

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good morning, gang

04:01:27 Exist / Kuskyn

Her viti is visible itself just the coat is hiding it, viti 3 is the top of the tail and the back of the shoulders, viti 3 on females is in general a little harder to see ;-;

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January 9, 2022 09:40 PM

Darkseeker

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Improved version.

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 9, 2022 10:14 PM

los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

January 10, 2022 09:41 AM

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los campesinos! said:

i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲

What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺

January 10, 2022 11:43 AM

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I think the nose just blend's in too much.

January 10, 2022 11:44 AM

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Revenge Full Of Lust said:

I think the nose just blend's in too much.

Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.

January 10, 2022 11:48 AM

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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

January 10, 2022 12:27 PM

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Eternity said:

I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

Thank you!

I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-

January 10, 2022 11:09 PM

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Now she just looks like a thick calved gym bro

EDIT: Fixed her... again-

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 11, 2022 12:22 PM

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I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick

January 11, 2022 12:23 PM

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Vanilla Latte said:

I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick

It's more of a style choice makin' them curvy!

I appreciate you taking the time to comment! I appreciate it so so so much! <333 ^///^

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