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 Zeraphia
08:55:23 Festive Vah
Ayii

XD

Surprise! I like to have a little animation for my pfp. I don't think I've had a stagnant one in ... shoot... almost a year or two now.

Thanks! I really need to doodle more/update it. It's kind of old.
 Zeraphia
08:49:21 Festive Vah
Tea

I'm trying. XD I think the long hours of not having anything to really do is driving me nuts.

I've started a small story but we'll see how long that lasts before I get tired of it.
 Ayii
08:49:14 
Vah I was not prepared for your profile to wink at me, I about fell out of my chair-

love your bio art!
 The Tea Drinkers
08:48:06 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
Touché, take a break and take care of yourself
 Zeraphia
08:47:34 Festive Vah
XD

I might do a christmas themed one later. I still want to work on my little holiday card that has somehow become a tradition. ^^'
 Dont Fear The Reaper
08:45:46 Reaper / Grim
With all this talk of Vah's beautiful art, I thought I might as well say something. I'm finally getting a human character and can't wait for Vah to open up a YCH again, then I can finally buy from you! Haha
 Zeraphia
08:41:16 Festive Vah
I don't know if I'll sell anything for a bit. I've kind of done back to back to back auctions. XD that's a lot for me. Not quite as much as the angel-army but definitely a lot.

I don't know if I could do it like that, I think it would be considered fandom-like art.
 The Tea Drinkers
08:40:09 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
I know, I literally squealed with joy when you PMed me XD
Maybe you could do a YCH that's human 👀👀👀 /j
but more wolfie adopts for sure. Maybe do them based off books?
 Zeraphia
08:38:58 Festive Vah
Tea

XDD you definitely got lucky I will say that.

I might look at doing some art but I don't know yet. I ran out of ideas that I 'want' to do... that aren't like.. super spoilers XD
 Catori
08:36:34 Cat
94 hours and still hasn't popped
-WP Click-
 The Tea Drinkers
08:33:36 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
thats so real XD I was ready to fight tooth and nail for him in that auction and was literally grinding in explore to try and get enough
 Forest Dwelling
08:33:16 I am on Wolflocke ok
@Tea

You're free to do so if you want :> holiday discount made some YCHs as cheap as 80 mush
 Zeraphia
08:32:40 Festive Vah
Tea

XDD I'm not gonna lie, it was SUPER tempting to keep him.
 The Tea Drinkers
08:32:13 Tea, Tea Queen
Forest
I've actually been debating putting him in your YCH shop XD but you're welcome to draw him :D
 Forest Dwelling
08:31:39 I am on Wolflocke ok
@Tea

Not just cute- absolutely stunning! You mind if I draw him for fun sometime?
 The Tea Drinkers
08:31:29 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
you and Ayii really went off on his cuteness
 LeafClan
08:30:46 Leaf she/her
Alastor greets Love Kills.
 The Tea Drinkers
08:30:38 Tea, Tea Queen
Ayii
aww <3 I'll put it as his nickname XD
 Zeraphia
08:30:33 Festive Vah
Tea

That art looks absolutely amazing.
 Forest Dwelling
08:29:58 I am on Wolflocke ok
@LeafClan

Bastard got tagteamed by 3 mountain lions and made me cheat for a 2nd time, so now I can't use him for anything or even give him cp

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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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