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The heck auto correct-_-

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Originally, when I was playing a few days ago, my paddle would either slide all the way up or all the way down. It wouldn't follow along the side at my pace- and the ball was slow as can be. Now the paddle goes where I want it to, but the ball is hyper-speed

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The store had those rubber pig dog toys for sale.

So, I figured it'd make a solid christmas present for the dogs.

... it has been four hours of pig noises.

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For me it's going as slow as it possibly can

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Is anyone else's pong on steroids? The ball is going full blast from the start for me. x_x

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I want to make desert for thanksgiving tomorrow but last year no one ate what I made so I dont know :,)

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I love the colors of her pups
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Damn! He's gorgeous though

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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