Wolf Play : Criticism Needed
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 Apothecary
10:57:37 Tay
I wish I could participate in the fmc this time around :( but too much work for me.
 Amygdala
10:53:45 Amy
-WP Click-

Little shit is playing the waiting game with me
 Arctic Moon
10:52:10 NY, Malo, Arctic
My toaster just caught fire
 Polargeist
10:48:09 Chro (he/him)
ET -
That is the most flattering photo ever I love that
Ahahahh no stress <33 It's only 5 days in after all :D
You're so fast at attacking though how do you do ittt <\3
 Pheonix
10:43:05 
do pups with custom parents have a chance of inheriting those pelts or will their pelts be random like with pups who have parents with dyed pelts?
 Ecifircas
10:43:04 
Significantly better image of my son. -Click-
 Eternity
10:42:52 ET
Woofer
He's so cute in that picture what do you mean? </3
 Eternity
10:41:48 ET
Polar
Awhh qwq that's so sweet of you. I'm coming for your dudes too I swear, just gotta find the steam to draw more humans LMAO

And thank you! :D It was a very cool OC *^*
 Ecifircas
10:40:42 
001, why did you send the worst photo of him ever?
 Eternity
10:40:08 ET
Now I have this guy to eat the flies and spiders in my house though
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 Shampoooo
10:39:01 
Wobbledogs is stressful when your dogs are all starving
 Polargeist
10:38:00 Chro (he/him)
I'm the dedicated spider remover in our class </3 I'm the only guy who dare pick them up and bring them outside
 BJake
10:37:57 Don't call me BJ.
@Ecifircas
Eesh Black widows are no fun. Look at us all vibing with spiders in our rooms ✨
 Polargeist
10:37:24 Chro (he/him)
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Yepss :D you were a priority considering I did promise I'd draw the mans <3 he was lovely to draw, I had a lot of fun with the wings :D
Thank you bro :> I'll have to clear some bookmarks first though hehehe
Also I'm in love with your last attack omg, that strain is amazingg
 Eternity
10:37:06 ET
We chilling
 Eternity
10:36:57 ET
My house gets so many spiders I swear
 Ecifircas
10:36:43 
BJake, my room has a cracked window. I know the feeling all too well - except with Black Widows. :,)
 BJake
10:35:26 Don't call me BJ.
@Ecifircas
Here's a couple recents
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 Eternity
10:31:51 ET
Polar
Awh I was your second one? :D

You've got this! Don't stress about attacking/revenging everyone.

I can always help you find some ferals who are up your street! :0
 BJake
10:31:17 Don't call me BJ.
@Ecifircas
Unfortunately the wolf spiders also pay a visit, especially the Wolf Spiders
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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

Thought? Post below.

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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