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 Lazy Kingdom
01:38:13 Lazy, Crazy Cat Lady
Aurora
I just added little ghosts ^^
 Aurora tribe
01:35:14 Mist
Hmm I really like it how it is Lazy, but hmm maybe a little spirit friend or a lantern?
 Lazy Kingdom
01:30:59 Lazy, Crazy Cat Lady
suggestions not designs*
 Lazy Kingdom
01:30:47 Lazy, Crazy Cat Lady
-WP Click-
decor / gear designs or is she good?
 Aurora tribe
01:21:34 Mist
Kat happy accidents, also Their so Cute
 ScardeyKat
01:17:24 Kat ?
Hey Desti!
 Aurora tribe
01:17:24 Mist
☠️☠️ Finally! I finished, now lvl 2 ☠️
 Destinations End
01:15:33 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Somber
Please advertise your looking to buy that in sales chat
 ScardeyKat
01:14:56 Kat ?
I go to draw humans and dragons appear instead </3
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 DevilsPlayground
01:06:40 Devil (Any pronouns)
Spooky Doodles

My Words to Her: Do you see me getting a paycheck for giving a fuck? Nah You dont. So that most likely means... you can take your relationship and stick it


I wont cry over it. I have someone (Mafia)

We learn from mistakes

And he was by far the worst mistake ive ever made :)
 Doodle Dragon
01:03:10 Irish Gay Rat
Devil,
Oh- well it's good that you don't care :3
 DevilsPlayground
01:01:32 Devil (Any pronouns)
Spooky Doodles

Im doing alright, my Ex's New girlfriend is rubbing their relationship in my face lol

I could care less, I honestly feel bad for that girl
 Doodle Dragon
12:59:08 Irish Gay Rat
Devil,
Im good, you?
 avelexa
12:53:48 lex
mist, if you mean the event npcs, no you dont! just the regular enemies lol
 DevilsPlayground
12:53:02 Devil (Any pronouns)
Spooky Doodles

How are ya??
 Aurora tribe
12:51:23 Mist
Do you have to kill even all the humans to continue to the next map on explore??
 Moth
12:46:14 
lex
presumably you have to get to level 5
 Doodle Dragon
12:38:54 Irish Gay Rat
Devil,
Hi :3
 avelexa
12:37:47 lex
does anyone know how to use the charon's blessing? it doesn't appear at the wp page lol
 Wilverbeast
12:33:36 Will
oh god @-@
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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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