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 The Sigma
09:57:06 Leon, Sigma
He had so much potential ToT

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 Everlasting Torment
09:56:47 Anubis, Samael
bane its hard when there 5 and i only have1 dg whos my pusere XD
 technoblade
09:56:36 Lil Techy | Techno
i've done so many event quests today
 Magnus Bane
09:55:04 Mag/Maggy
The ox's aren't that hard and they drop 20 mush
 technoblade
09:54:42 Lil Techy | Techno
i enjoy the musk oxs
 Everlasting Torment
09:54:07 Anubis, Samael
mine are currently musk oxs XD
 Magnus Bane
09:53:23 Mag/Maggy
Yea I don't fuck with elephants lol
 technoblade
09:52:27 Lil Techy | Techno
Mushrooms: 8,000

even number!
 technoblade
09:51:49 Lil Techy | Techno
Leon

True which is why I skip water buffalo and elephants
 The Sigma
09:51:07 Leon, Sigma
Techno

And the worst part is, you have to defeat them to level up ToT

At least prey are optional :,)
 Everlasting Torment
09:50:25 Anubis, Samael
space thats so cool
 technoblade
09:49:53 Lil Techy | Techno
Leon

Brown bears and sun bears both wipe my team out, it's no fun at times
 Liminal Space
09:49:09 Liminal Space
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should I add more Runes??
 Everlasting Torment
09:49:09 Anubis, Samael
is this pup worth keeping

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 The Sigma
09:48:58 Leon, Sigma
Techno

At least they beat the sun bears of jungle, who have 250 HP, and both the agility and damage to wipe out my entire team ToT
 Zeraphia
09:48:54 Spooky Vah
Techno

... well at least they only show up in ones.
 Zeraphia
09:48:42 Spooky Vah
Bears in general, mountain lions, alligators are a pain (but heck yes coyotes are great) don't like musk ox. They're not even an enemy but good grief. Musk ox and moose 0/10
 technoblade
09:47:57 Lil Techy | Techno
zera

next tile, you spy 1 big foot
 Zeraphia
09:47:26 Spooky Vah
Techno

Brown bears and mountain lions. The top two worst enemies in forest.
 technoblade
09:46:56 Lil Techy | Techno
you spy 5 brown bears

yay...

ten tiles later... you spy 5 brown bears

...i hate explore

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Looking for constructive criticism for my artNovember 26, 2021 03:17 PM


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yeah as the title says!
I dont like my art or my style lol, so i need ya'lls help to improve it
tell me what to fix
Yeah. Just help me fix all my shit ^^
Looking for constructive criticism for my artNovember 30, 2021 04:10 PM


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Okay, so where to start. The head. The head is very odd? Ears are way too big and they do NOT have tufts like that. Ear tufts are invisible, if hardly even there at all. The eyes are too big, and the muzzle is smushed down. The cheek fur all needs to go down and with the flow of the fur. The fur overgrowth needs to go away on the eye as well.
It looks like you were trying to male them look skinny while still fluffy? They are either one or the other, as the fur will cover that up. The body is too small, the neck too big. The legs need to be shortened and brought forward a tad. Like I said before, stop the overgrowth in the fur!!! Get rid of the odd tufts on the legs. Period. The legs bent at a very awkward angle. We arent drawing horses! It's a bit less noticeable then how you made it.
The hind leg needs to be pulled back a tad, it's too round. The fur, again, needs to be taken away. I changed the angle quite a bit, to match with realistic animals.
The tail is too "fluffed out" and is way too long.
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There. I am not going to sugarcoat anything. You said constructive criticism; it's not an artistic choice when you want to improve.

Edited at November 30, 2021 04:13 PM by Interstellar Sun
Looking for constructive criticism for my artDecember 2, 2021 10:44 AM


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Thank you, this was EXACTLY the type of crit i was looking for! No need to worry! ^^
I do tend to overfluff the bodies. Thats something I really need to cut down on, thank you for pointing it out!
My main problems for the face and such are the muzzles and ears. Scorpius is a fennec fox, so I think I overexagerated the ears way too much, and the muzzle simply looks wonky when I try to draw it face on and long, so I tend to do them facing the side or 3/4s.
Do you mind having a tutorial of how to do the muzzle facing forward? Its something I do really struggle with ^^
The legs are also something I need to start doing better on. I often only use guidelines for the face/neck, and just sketch out the legs/tail/body on its own, except for a few seperate times. I do need to also look at a few references, like the one you posted above, and such ^^
thanks, inter! Means alot! I'll post some more art in my gallery with my progress soon! ^^

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