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 kycantina
05:29:36 ky but it's spooky
*then
 Amygdala
05:29:24 Amy/Anpmygdala
You spy 6 Brown Bears.

Why again...and 6 of you on top of that. RIP my team
 kycantina
05:29:18 ky but it's spooky
ET, it was dry all day than was conveniently tipping down while I was in the middle of carrying my costco haul to the bus stop
 Amygdala
05:28:13 Amy/Anpmygdala
Why is explore so slow i need to hurry up 🥲
 Zeraphia
05:28:04 Spooky Vah
Meanwhile, on the other side, there's not a cloud in sight.

Be safe y'all.
 Eternity
05:26:25 ET
Not as big as the US, granted. Stay safe out there guys 😭
 Eternity
05:25:51 ET
We have a big storm going on right now LMAO
 BloodWeb
05:25:46 Blood/Nicole
Thunderstorms sure but he thinks ours are weak lol
 kycantina
05:25:00 ky but it's spooky
As an midwesterner who moved to the UK I do miss the big thunderstorms lol
 TheFlyingKitten
05:24:42 Petri Dish/Sorceress
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Still shocked that I got this.
 technoblade
05:24:14 Lil Techy | Techno
Mushrooms: 3,569

Well I'm getting there
 BloodWeb
05:22:30 Blood/Nicole
Yea idk what his problem is lol he hates it here so much he's delusional. He also thinks 70 is cold 😂
 technoblade
05:21:49 Lil Techy | Techno
Blood

Imma second that notion
 BloodWeb
05:21:11 Blood/Nicole
I live in IN and my boyfriend is from GA he says he missed the hurricanes. He's a psycho lol
 technoblade
05:19:01 Lil Techy | Techno
Amy

I can't fathom it either since I live in a state that rarely gets more than a minor tropical storm.
 Boeing
05:18:48 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
ky
yeah my bad it's been a conspiracy against you the entire time xD
 Poe
05:18:18 
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Opinions? He has a tan base?
 kycantina
05:17:55 ky but it's spooky
Boe, its all a conspiracy to stop me from exploring the territories in my very silly nonsensical way >:( /joke
 Amygdala
05:17:44 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
I just hope people will manage to get to safety...here in slovenia the worst we get are storms with strong wind and floods....i can't imagine how it must be to get hit by a hurricane
 technoblade
05:16:38 Lil Techy | Techno
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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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