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 Tiny Village
05:25:21 Tiny
Amy

Good just heading to work talk to u later!
 Amygdala
05:24:43 Amy/Anpmygdala
Tiny
Getting some exploring done before work

I am a bit sleppy but i'll live XD

How are you?
 Tiny Village
05:23:36 Tiny
Hi Amy! How are you?
 Amygdala
05:22:01 Amy/Anpmygdala
Hi tiny
 Tiny Village
05:21:26 Tiny
Ello
 Amygdala
05:13:57 Amy/Anpmygdala
Bear
I didn't even notice it 🤣
No worries i misspell stuff a lot
 Bears den
05:12:05 Bear
Woops I meant Amy sorry
 Bears den
05:11:15 Bear
Any
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 Amygdala
05:09:25 Amy/Anpmygdala
Bear
I know...i had to use the bottom attack button lol
 Amygdala
05:09:00 Amy/Anpmygdala
Floor
Well the important one got away in all that confusion...coyotes didn't stand a chance though XD
 Bears den
05:08:41 Bear
Amy
lol they donÂ’t even fit
 Forest Dwelling
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@Amy

Good luck-
 Amygdala
05:07:01 Amy/Anpmygdala
Exscuse you?
You spy 7 Creatures.

-Click-
 Forest Dwelling
05:06:26 Wolflocke Challenge
@Cae

I know, I'm just pointing out that it's a weird coincidence
 Caeruleum
05:05:19 Cae, Blue
Do bidoo encounter first, battle stays until you defeat them all
 Forest Dwelling
05:04:14 Wolflocke Challenge
I keep running into wolverines to battle on the same tile I find Bidoo explore-
 Amygdala
05:04:02 Amy/Anpmygdala
Thought so
Well if the bug was reportes we just have to wait for it to be fixed XD
 Willow Creek
05:04:00 
Ah I see I see.
 Salem
05:02:47 Bell
There's a bug forum for it :P
 Willow Creek
05:01:10 
It was working yesterday and when I didnt earn a point it'd just say 'The wolf yips and goes to lay in the shade'.

Is the 'cant play right now' a glitch, then?

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


Hallbjorns

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


Vennenum

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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And the eyes are a little small

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