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Silent Lucidity

07:28:17 Silent, Lucid

Dark
Good luck with that!

Cae
I'll just send you all the dud bones I get then lol
Good luck with that!

07:27:52 Rogue is a Ghost

I had a wolverine a while ago, but I accidentally retired him
-WP Click-

07:27:05 Rogue is a Ghost

I've been wanting the bone wings for a while, so whenever I get bones it's very helpful

07:26:57 Sky but spooky - she

cae yeah i know.. its a literal struggle lol

07:26:05 Sky but spooky - she

silent im hoarding
for Wolverine Dye but im too far from it lol

07:25:25 Cae, Blue

dark, i miss forest its been 1 day since ive been there and i wanna go back T^T

but toucans are expensive eugh

lucid, thank :D 500 more and imma be halfway to the goal XD

Silent Lucidity

07:24:50 Silent, Lucid

Dark
No problem :)
They sit and collect dust despite the amount of duds I get lol. There's typically not anything in the shops that I desperately want

07:24:04 Sky but spooky - she

aww thanks silent :)

Silent Lucidity

07:23:46 Silent, Lucid

Rogue
Your welcome :)

07:23:36 Sky but spooky - she

cae forest is better for sure, but jungle for winter i think

07:23:13 Cae, Blue

im gonna try to get to 10k bones *^*

07:22:45 Rogue is a Ghost

Thanks ^^

07:22:29 Cae, Blue

80 moves in jungle, not even 100 mush. whoever said its profitable, you liar :(

Silent Lucidity

07:21:48 Silent, Lucid

Dark
Maybe. I don't really use them or having anything is shop and I get a measly 67 bones

07:21:28 Sky but spooky - she

if yes id love some, because im low on them :3

07:21:05 Sky but spooky - she

silent haha youd really give?

07:20:50 Rogue is a Ghost

Can I have bones please? :)

Silent Lucidity

07:19:56 Silent, Lucid

Who wants bones??

07:17:06 Sky but spooky - she

cae he has nice vitals too lol

07:15:13 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
of course 40+r acs come when i want bones >:(

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May 11, 2020 04:00 PM

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Darkseeker

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[c]157083

BOOM

ANOTHER ONE

Alright, leave the black lined one I'm happy with that. Please just help with the red one.

This thread has indeed been reused.

Edited at July 9, 2020 02:33 PM by Eternity

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May 11, 2020 04:04 PM

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It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:05 PM by Deceit

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May 11, 2020 04:06 PM

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Deceit said:

It looks good, besides the size of the tail. A little more fluff on the legs, they look pretty bare.

Thanks! I'll consider adding some fluff on the legs.

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May 11, 2020 04:07 PM

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I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.

I love the tail btw

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May 11, 2020 04:09 PM

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Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?

(Credits to Jessica Gibson)

Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:11 PM by Reathmuaz

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May 11, 2020 04:11 PM

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Sabbath said:

I think one thing that's throwing me off with it is the back legs. The right-back leg seems to be down lower than the left-back leg and it's messing up the perspective.

I love the tail btw

Thank you! :D That's super helpful-

I've added one with altered back legs now, so hopefully, that improves the perspective?
Thanks! I like the tail too- well, I like the concept--

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May 11, 2020 04:13 PM

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Reathmuaz said:

Really what I can offer are the haunches, and shoulders..? They need to be a little more thicker, and muscular, if that makes sense?

-snip-

(Credits to Jessica Gibson)

Make the haunches a little more point, in a sense.

Thank you-

That's deffo helpful. I'm gonna put him a little on the skinnier side, but that picture illustrates the base stuff I need to follow like,,, a lot-

Edited at May 11, 2020 04:13 PM by Eternity

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May 11, 2020 04:42 PM

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From considering my own style-

idk if it will help at all-

bring the chest a little lower down. Like just pull the sternum a little lower and round it. Then like Reath said, those shoulders and hips *^* also agreeing with Sabbath lol (I'm sorry I piggybacked-)

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May 11, 2020 04:51 PM

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Thanks Bro! <3

I'm honestly giving up with this lowered head to come back to on a later date, I'll raise the head up instead as I'm more confident with that. :')

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May 11, 2020 05:00 PM

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I agree with others on the left bAck leg, it looks off.

The head also look weirdly small too me. But that might be because my drawings have say too big heads

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