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 Boeing
03:28:23 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Kneecap stealer
XD good luck on getting to 1000000 mush then lol
Let's see how one day goes first
 Continental Wolves
03:26:53 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Boe
Now to see how much I can save in one day :D
 Boeing
03:25:33 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Kneecap stealer
...
Good point I guess lol
(that is until you get to your goal)
 Continental Wolves
03:24:45 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Boe
You convinced me to not be a spending addict (WP currency wise)
 starmutt
03:23:59 marsh | they/it
you guys want mine feathers </3 they're bound to get stolen
 BuggyOs
03:22:50 Bug-a-boo
Ky
I knowww and the bird guy aint dropping any
 kycantina
03:22:27 ky but it's spooky
Bug, oof same, robin feathers are so expensive right now
 Boo
03:21:38 Chrissy
rook,
damn! do you like shiba inu on her at all?
 technoblade
03:21:32 Lil Techy | Techno
Emmet

Ooo go for it! That's the same goal as me :D
 Boeing
03:21:15 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
what did I do
 BuggyOs
03:21:12 Bug-a-boo
ky
...I also have been buying moves nonstop and had to buy potions to rid my wolves of injuries
 Continental Wolves
03:20:46 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Techno
Im going to start a mission to get to 1 million mush
 kycantina
03:20:26 ky but it's spooky
Bug, I spent 2k on moves and 3k on CP too, surprised it's not lower
 Sabbath
03:19:50 Rook
If she had panda face marking... she would be so pretty god damn why did I look
 Poe
03:19:37 
Loving the game of thrones nicknames lol.
 BloodWeb
03:19:27 Blood/Nicole
Oh I'm surprisingly in the positives for profit it looks like
 Sabbath
03:19:18 Rook
Mother of Dragons
yeahh I think she'd be prettier if only she had a face marking
 BuggyOs
03:19:17 Bug-a-boo
Ky
I bought 2000 explore moves I have yet to use, plus 1000cp, sooo I'm low on mush (ignoring the 30,000 in my holes)
 technoblade
03:19:05 Lil Techy | Techno
Today's Profit: 7050

:)
 Sabbath
03:18:44 Rook
Boo
Eh I'm not sure what dye I'd use though. Looking at custom maker with the ones I have access to, none of them look good lol

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Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 04:58 PM


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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.
https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg
((Made by me duh))
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 05:06 PM


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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 05:09 PM


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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)


Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 05:16 PM


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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques
Advise and CritiqueJune 25, 2019 06:56 PM


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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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