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 Polargeist
10:48:09 Chro (he/him)
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That is the most flattering photo ever I love that
Ahahahh no stress <33 It's only 5 days in after all :D
You're so fast at attacking though how do you do ittt <\3
 Pheonix
10:43:05 
do pups with custom parents have a chance of inheriting those pelts or will their pelts be random like with pups who have parents with dyed pelts?
 Ecifircas
10:43:04 
Significantly better image of my son. -Click-
 Eternity
10:42:52 ET
Woofer
He's so cute in that picture what do you mean? </3
 Eternity
10:41:48 ET
Polar
Awhh qwq that's so sweet of you. I'm coming for your dudes too I swear, just gotta find the steam to draw more humans LMAO

And thank you! :D It was a very cool OC *^*
 Ecifircas
10:40:42 
001, why did you send the worst photo of him ever?
 Eternity
10:40:08 ET
Now I have this guy to eat the flies and spiders in my house though
-Click-
 Shampoooo
10:39:01 
Wobbledogs is stressful when your dogs are all starving
 Polargeist
10:38:00 Chro (he/him)
I'm the dedicated spider remover in our class </3 I'm the only guy who dare pick them up and bring them outside
 BJake
10:37:57 Don't call me BJ.
@Ecifircas
Eesh Black widows are no fun. Look at us all vibing with spiders in our rooms ✨
 Polargeist
10:37:24 Chro (he/him)
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Yepss :D you were a priority considering I did promise I'd draw the mans <3 he was lovely to draw, I had a lot of fun with the wings :D
Thank you bro :> I'll have to clear some bookmarks first though hehehe
Also I'm in love with your last attack omg, that strain is amazingg
 Eternity
10:37:06 ET
We chilling
 Eternity
10:36:57 ET
My house gets so many spiders I swear
 Ecifircas
10:36:43 
BJake, my room has a cracked window. I know the feeling all too well - except with Black Widows. :,)
 BJake
10:35:26 Don't call me BJ.
@Ecifircas
Here's a couple recents
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 Eternity
10:31:51 ET
Polar
Awh I was your second one? :D

You've got this! Don't stress about attacking/revenging everyone.

I can always help you find some ferals who are up your street! :0
 BJake
10:31:17 Don't call me BJ.
@Ecifircas
Unfortunately the wolf spiders also pay a visit, especially the Wolf Spiders
💔
 Ecifircas
10:29:44 
BJake, niiice. Landlord (ish) special, lol.

With that gap by the door, who can be surprised the rollies want to pay you a visit? <|3
 Shampoooo
10:29:38 
My ads are like "-wp click-
ALbino for 150 mush"
 Polargeist
10:28:57 Chro (he/him)
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I'm two attacks in ACK- Honestly I really wanna revenge everyone but at this tempo it's gonna be hard :'D I'll do my best though! I also have a bunch bookmarked so I gotta get to them :') kinda wish more people had feral ocs as well cause at this rate I'm gonna completely burn out LMAO

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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