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 Clear Sky
02:36:38 Sky / Blue - she,her
im going to go with spirit thankss
 OCCULTIST
02:36:31 Man Lover
Nyx,
aghh sentimental tattoos like that are so sweet ;; i'd get so emotional, i could never ashghdf
 SilverMountain
02:36:02 The Naming Empress
Spirit?
Wild?
Goofball?
 SilverMountain
02:34:15 The Naming Empress
HmmÂ…
 Clear Sky
02:33:28 Sky / Blue - she,her
silver

something shorter for 99?
 SilverMountain
02:32:06 The Naming Empress
65 = Scouter, Scout?
99 = Fenrir, Boarpelt, Cannonball?
 Mistress Nyx
02:30:12 
Occultist:
Oh! Well scorpions are pretty cool!
Oof! The skin condition could definitely make tattoos more difficult.
My favorites? For sure my sternum and my back tattoo. I also have my grandma's writing on my wrist that says "Love you lots" so definitely that one too. It was done in a way so it even looks like the sharpie she wrote it in.

Ohh! Ill need to snoop around for that then!
 Clear Sky
02:29:39 Sky / Blue - she,her
ye i like those
 Polargeist
02:29:30 Chro (he/him)
Why is the entire damn site's CSS messed up I can't see any of the text
 SilverMountain
02:29:17 The Naming Empress
Clear
33 = Quicksand?
73 = oakley, oaklan?
 SilverMountain
02:27:51 The Naming Empress
Petri
True
True
😔
 SilverMountain
02:27:31 The Naming Empress
Encrypted
Maybe finally my explorer team WonÂ’t die every time we meet a boar
 Crypto Currency
02:26:55 Ash they/them
kitten, real
 OCCULTIST
02:26:52 Man Lover
it'd* augh
 Crypto Currency
02:26:46 Ash they/them
silver, have fun with her :)
 OCCULTIST
02:26:42 Man Lover
Nyx,
Oh no, she just thought i'd be cool I think!
I don't have any yet, but I do want some in the future! I have a killer skin condition though, so its something I'll have to consider
13 is crazy!! :0 what are all your favourites?

fair enough, art even kills ME 😔 I've posted some of my attacks here! But i'll probably wait till the event ends to post any more
 TheFlyingKitten
02:26:41 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
Drawing wings is such a tedious process...
 SilverMountain
02:26:01 The Naming Empress
All right, got my new CS
Now to go to Clears then
 Clear Sky
02:24:59 Sky / Blue - she,her
yeah no problem
 Mistress Nyx
02:24:38 
I desperately want a badger oc :')

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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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