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 Eternity
11:11:53 ET
Ah, looks like it. When isn't postimg down, to be honest?
 Hells Bells
11:10:03 Ven/Vex
Is postimg down for anyone else?
 Mistress Nyx
11:09:03 
RP actions are not allowed.
 Sea Coast
10:59:29 
@Fire
Hey I can take them back!!
 Thunder Struck
10:58:50 Thunder
criticism please :>
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 Autumn's Fire
10:54:34 Autumn . . . ?
Not anymore
 Arctic Moon
10:54:06 NY, Malo, Arctic
Wait has chat been dead for a full half hour?
 Arctic Moon
10:50:17 NY, Malo, Arctic
Skyfall howls at the moon! 23 wolves hear them, and 15 howl back!

My ExH 50 *facepalms*
 Ámor
10:20:33 Cloudz, Pumpkin
@ET
Yeah me too or ill just ignore them xD they shouldve pointed out months ago
 Ecifircas
10:19:20 
serene, nah.
 Eternity
10:18:20 ET
Aight, I gotta get back to this AF attack B) won't draw itself.

Good luck with the work shenanigans though! Just gotta hope they get moved to a different department or something I guess LMAO
 Ámor
10:15:09 Cloudz, Pumpkin
@ET
Yeah i know, i have a few friends at work who are girls and arent drama, its just some of the girls at my job are so much drama is overwhelmes me
 Eternity
10:13:49 ET
Amor
Girls aren't all drama, y'know. Sounds like you're just around the wrong girls ahah.

I've seen plenty of drama with blokes too
 Jelly
10:13:47 Gel,Jello,Jells
Salem
She and all the Jasmine dropping creatures just like to cyber bully us in explore LMAO
 Ámor
10:13:46 Cloudz, Pumpkin
@ET
whats worse, is this girl who was my "friend" knows i dont pick up on social cues easily because of my health problems and before i met my boyfriend I isolated my self and she still does this... she knows i have bad health issues and a disability
 serene.
10:12:33 ✧ ren
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Should I keep this? :,))
 FaithfulOakTree
10:12:04 Ash H:H!!
My mouth is on fire😭
 Avatar Of Lust
10:10:57 Asmodeus (he/they)
Natures Heart hunts prey and brings it to Sugar Rush

Stats: Social +3
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 Salem
10:10:41 
Jello
The sad part is she was so close to dying too :')
 Ámor
10:10:39 Cloudz, Pumpkin
@ET
I have a few friends who are girls, but at my job girls have the most drama so my guy friends dont mind that I hang out with them more hehe, i prefer having more guy friends cause im just a girl who doesnt like drama :")

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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