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I've set up the chaos now lol let's see how they do the poll was mostly between 50 and 100

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-WP Click- dose this make sense ? as I have never done Genderflux before for an charature and want to make sure its accurate pm me or comment

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11:31:16 She /her/ daughter/

Six Bears
580 paws
me 133 paws
XD

11:29:46 She /her/ daughter/

Funny

11:28:24 Space Pirate Captain

Me passing out at 11:30 just amazed--

11:26:11 She /her/ daughter/

XD

11:26:05 She /her/ daughter/

;)

11:25:13 marsh | they/it

i wish i slept at midnight lol i always drag it till 3am

11:24:54 She /her/ daughter/

IK right

11:24:24 marsh | they/it

midnight is a perfectly good sleeping time in my opinion

11:23:35 She /her/ daughter/

Playing beetle

11:22:26 She /her/ daughter/

Hello Chat

11:21:55

Hi forest

11:21:46 She /her/ daughter/

Hello

11:20:10 She /her/ daughter/

My time it is 10:20 now

11:19:15 She /her/ daughter/

I am in bed and bored I don't fall asleep until like 12:00

11:14:07 Reaper / Grim

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I bet they'll do well, absolutely love them :3

11:13:08

Reaper
I've set up the chaos now lol let's see how they do the poll was mostly between 50 and 100

11:11:34 Reaper / Grim

Thanks Cap :3

11:11:09 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

I'd say the auctions work just fine.

11:10:38 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- dose this make sense ? as I have never done Genderflux before for an charature and want to make sure its accurate pm me or comment

11:10:26 Reaper / Grim

I'm trying to decide if I should keep doing these as auctions or have them be set price adopts

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June 7, 2022 02:05 PM

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Idk if it's the colors or the lines or whatever but some thing is wrong here. Can y'all help me out?

She's based on a lionfish

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June 7, 2022 02:10 PM

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She sorta looks scary

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June 7, 2022 02:22 PM

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maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

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June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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I was trying to go for a cute but creepy vibe, not sure how well that came across lol

awooo said:

She sorta looks scary

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June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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Yeah, I tend to leave lining till last cause I hate doing it and while I was doing it I realized I didn't like something

swiftystarss said:

maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

Edited at June 7, 2022 02:26 PM by Flower Field

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June 7, 2022 03:48 PM

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Maybe it's that dip in the tail? Looks a bit too sharp. Could also be the facial features? Seems a bit off, compared ta the rest of the art.

Edited at June 7, 2022 03:55 PM by Cinnabar Banks Pack

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June 7, 2022 03:49 PM

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I find her eyes unsettling, haha they're just so different than the art style. The only way I could explain it is if you put googly eyes over a face.

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June 7, 2022 03:50 PM

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I think the proportion of the head is slightly off? Especially in comparison to the size of their arms...

Also it might be that there isn't much of a chin, which sort of breaks up a lot of the sharper lines that you have!

I really like the premise / concept, and it looks good, just not exactly proportional to the way a body looks! <3

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June 7, 2022 04:32 PM

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Alright! Took some things into consideration and here's V2

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June 7, 2022 04:38 PM

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I like this a lot more! Her arms don't look nearly as stretched out, which (in my opinion) makes the rest of her body look a lot more proportional and less wonky! Plus the lineart and fin detailing helped a lot.

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