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omg aww :,)
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Tea

It's just a discussion. There might, later, be a potential RP. But right now it's just a discussion and art gallery lol
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Tea
I was up til like 1 last night and too tired to post but I deadass had a drafted PM that says I miss you xD
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Ace
yayyy :D I can t even say how much ive missed your posts
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Tea
I just have to grab some food (and a steamy water my room is so dry) and then I can start :P
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Ace
I'm technically in the middle of a different post anyways but whatever

Vah
Is there a real sign ups? or is it just a discussion thingy?
 Acerbus.
05:37:59 Ace | Cerberus
Tea
I just got done doing an art hold on >.> you bloodthirsty mongrel xD
 The Tea Drinkers
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Ace
if youre apparently not busy you could be drafting a post hmmm?
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Tea
Join us e.e
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Vah
perhaps then :0 i have no idea I get very easily stressed lol
 Zeraphia
05:35:02 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Nahh. It's pretty open. We're still working on handing out dragons to everybody too.
 The Tea Drinkers
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Vah
I've been thinking about it? I just hate joining late :,) I always feel super disconnected
 Zeraphia
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Tea

Hehehe join the space pirate group. we ride space dragons.

But it's a lot of fun, more or less we just goof off
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leaf,
he's pretty nice ^^
 LeafClan
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Katy what do you think of him?
 The Tea Drinkers
05:33:06 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
you seem to have gotten rather busy with your space buddies? lol
I finally have funds for buying art again, and all the artists I normally buy from aren't taking comms ^^"
I really want to get a piece from this one artist, but I don't think I've ever seen them take comms
 Zeraphia
05:31:28 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Oh man, yeah. I had a palette that was purple and whatnot but it was so hard on my eyes. I couldn't keep it.

Honestly, same. I haven't bought an actual commission in AGES.
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i bought a palette literally like 2 weeks before the updates </3 i miss looking at it lmao
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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


Hallbjorns

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


Vennenum

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


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And the eyes are a little small

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