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 Zeraphia
12:08:11 Space Pirate Captain
Cyber

I've heard that it helps. But we'l see if it's a bug-bug or if that'll help!
 Demon Mistress
12:07:43 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
Eve is trying to fix all the little bugs like that ti iron things out
 Cybertronion
12:07:18 Cyber / Onion
@zera

!! ill give that a try!
 Cybertronion
12:06:46 Cyber / Onion
@the scary

Will do! Probably not tonight though because i am sleepy
 Demon Mistress
12:04:27 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
Make sure you make a bug report that includes your operating system and browser info ^^
 Zeraphia
12:04:15 Space Pirate Captain
Cyber

Head to your device settings > keyboard settings > smart punctuation. Once you turn that off, your apostrophes and everything else won't panic XD
 Cybertronion
12:03:57 Cyber / Onion
@reaper

I just put my favorites in a gallery. Then it’s no pressure but sometimes it still gets updated
 Silvers Clan
12:03:52 
does perception help with finding pray?
 Cybertronion
12:03:22 Cyber / Onion
@the scary

Yep, trying to remember to not use apostrophies is haaaaard

Sorry for the weird symbol spam, i forgot ipads do that
 Zeraphia
12:00:05 Space Pirate Captain
But man, yeah. I'll look at some of my lines and just ;-;

That looks wrong. I color it in and it looks all good
 Zeraphia
11:59:39 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

It's up to you! You can try and see if you do or just leave it be.

Funny enough, aside from TH, WP is the only other place that has all of my art.
 The Reaper
11:59:04 Reaper / Grim
Cap
And y'all were right, it did look better once I got it colored in.

I feel like I need to make a gallery but I can never keep up with them
 Zeraphia
11:56:39 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Eyyy there we go!

Sometimes, it just needs a little fun background to look better
 Demon Mistress
11:56:27 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
Are you on mobile by chance?
 The Reaper
11:56:01 Reaper / Grim
Cap
That helped a little bit
-Click-
 Cybertronion
11:54:19 Cyber / Onion
@The Scary

Okie dokie!
 Zeraphia
11:54:05 Space Pirate Captain
I just need it to fit in the box;
-Click-

There's no real limit to the space or whatnot but... y'know?
 Zeraphia
11:53:34 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Not at all. You could probably add a little circular background and see if that helps?
 Cybertronion
11:53:03 Cyber / Onion
Backstories can be written as scenes ;D unless i suppose yoku’re submitting to a specific project that has a format requirement?

My backstory documents are a mess. But they work.

I write scenes to get into their heads and get to know them, or to have a reference for a very crucial past moment…. I also find it more interesting and engaging so it holds my focus better.

Then i just jot down other stuff in bullet lists, the details like “has a scar on left eye.” If i’ve come up with a reason for it ill add a note to it, but idk



You could start with just some details and lists on the page, then from there, push the text around until you’ve got it restructured in the format you want?
 The Reaper
11:52:57 Reaper / Grim
Cap
I feel like he's missing something (Other than his piercings)

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Hello all. I am in dire need of assistance.

I made this art piece. But there is a problem with it. I know the lines are messy, but that is not the problem currently.

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Something about the coloring is throwing me off. I started to shade it, and then I had to stop because I started to have a bit of a freak out over it. I have legitimate OCD, so when this happens it is very frustrating as I get extremely overwhelmed and obsessive - it generally ends with me spending hours (not an exaggeration) staring at it before deleting it and starting over. It's just like a nails on a chalkboard feeling, aha, or like a cheek-chew kinda frustration, and then I start repeating myself over and over and things get out of hand. That's how I can explain it - sorry I'm quite bad at putting it to words.

Anyways I like the piece and I don't want to delete it, but I know something is wrong with it and with my current OCD predicament I don't have the rationality to figure out exactly what about it is bothering me. It just looks very...off.

Any thoughts? Or could it actually be the line thickness? Or is it the colors? I'm sorry my weirdness is showing a bit.


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Could it be line thickness?
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i don't know what your ocd triggers are but ,,, i dunno maybe it's the coolness of the brown compared to the warmness of the other colors???
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Hmm overall its a really good peice! The problem isn't with the shading, lines or color its really with the leg.
I'm not really good with explaining so I did a redline
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Maybe the fact that the blue on the arrows and the blue of the eyes don't match?
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I don't see anything wrong with the colouring nor the lines, they all look perfect to me.
However, the back leg on the nearside doesn't look quite right. Do you think that might have something to do with it? Or do you definitely know it's something to do with the colours/ and/or lines?


Maybe try something a bit like this for the legs? Or follow T r e a s u r e ' s ahah-
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Ya'll are life savers ^^ I definitely need to thin out the lines but the leg problem, now pointed out, seems like it could be what's throwing my subconscious off.

The colors suggestions are also very helpful! I wasn't feeling this way when I had the brown as more of a cream color, so that's very astute.

I appreciate the help! I'm gonna try and apply the suggested changes to the piece now. It's hard for me with my OCD sometimes to problem solve, so I can't thank you guys enough for helping me out <3

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Eternity said:
I don't see anything wrong with the colouring nor the lines, they all look perfect to me.
However, the back leg on the nearside doesn't look quite right. Do you think that might have something to do with it? Or do you definitely know it's something to do with the colours/ and/or lines?
I'm not entirely sure, to be honest, but I'm definitely gonna try and fix the back legs as I think that might be the best bet ^u^ I appreciate you pointing it out!
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Red Queen said:

Eternity said:
I don't see anything wrong with the colouring nor the lines, they all look perfect to me.
However, the back leg on the nearside doesn't look quite right. Do you think that might have something to do with it? Or do you definitely know it's something to do with the colours/ and/or lines?
I'm not entirely sure, to be honest, but I'm definitely gonna try and fix the back legs as I think that might be the best bet ^u^ I appreciate you pointing it out!


No problemo! It really is a stunning piece ahah-
I added a very quick leg sketch on my original post, I don't know if that'll help or not.
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Eternity said:

Red Queen said:

Eternity said:
I don't see anything wrong with the colouring nor the lines, they all look perfect to me.
However, the back leg on the nearside doesn't look quite right. Do you think that might have something to do with it? Or do you definitely know it's something to do with the colours/ and/or lines?
I'm not entirely sure, to be honest, but I'm definitely gonna try and fix the back legs as I think that might be the best bet ^u^ I appreciate you pointing it out!


No problemo! It really is a stunning piece ahah-
I added a very quick leg sketch on my original post, I don't know if that'll help or not.


Thanks so much! It helps tremendously <3

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