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I recommend not doing nasal saline solution unless you know how to do it properly. I might have just ruined my ear trying to do nasal saline to unstuff my nose

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Yall i might have to go to the ER in the morning. My ear hurts so bad.

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I recommend not doing nasal saline solution unless you know how to do it properly. I might have just ruined my ear trying to do nasal saline to unstuff my nose

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Yall i might have to go to the ER in the morning. My ear hurts so bad.

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I'm tiredd

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

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June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

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June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

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June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

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June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

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June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

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June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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