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 Amygdala
04:10:18 Amy/Anpmygdala
Exist
Maybee the pastels could be for easter hehe
And naturals are cool too i am excited for the new pelt XD
 Existence
04:06:56 Exist / Kuskyn
Amy, this lot is more toward natural coats based off the information on the forum ^^; But maybe next time if there is a chance I might do some pastel ones
 Amygdala
04:05:13 Amy/Anpmygdala
Exist
Wow i love them
But honestly i would love to see some light pastel wolves XD
 Amygdala
03:58:42 Amy/Anpmygdala
Yay my wolves have finally been sorted XD

Niw i just need to finish adding dominance
 Existence
03:57:23 Exist / Kuskyn
Amy, these two are my favourites
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 Amygdala
03:46:59 Amy/Anpmygdala
Exist
I prefear gray scales too but some brown scales can be so pretty
 Existence
03:45:57 Exist / Kuskyn
Amy, I know full well I favour the grey scales xD
 Amygdala
03:45:53 Amy/Anpmygdala
Okay folder made
Appaerently i have 19 males
 Amygdala
03:45:30 Amy/Anpmygdala
People here are so talented
 Amygdala
03:45:14 Amy/Anpmygdala
Exist
Amazing
Some coats looks so pretty
 Existence
03:42:49 Exist / Kuskyn
Amy, I've been slowly making a bunch of coats for the contest xD
 Amygdala
03:42:04 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd
Fair enough lol
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03:41:08 Redd Dead
Amy,
Already gone. It wasn't that good
 Whispering Grove
03:40:21 fawnii (she/her)
Amy
thank you!! :D
Redd
It doesn't look too bad, I think the purple and white look quite nice together!! :3
 Amygdala
03:40:02 Amy/Anpmygdala
Exist
Ooo that would be cool
 Existence
03:39:41 Exist / Kuskyn
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Should I make a matching normal Coyote coat design? XD
 Amygdala
03:39:29 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd
I have the dyes XD
You just need to decide if you want to keep it hehe

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Heya!January 9, 2022 09:40 PM


Drakaina

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Improved version.

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS
Heya!January 9, 2022 10:14 PM


los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair
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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs
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and the nose is a lil eh
Heya!January 10, 2022 09:41 AM


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los campesinos! said:
i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair
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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs
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and the nose is a lil eh


I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲
What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:43 AM


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I think the nose just blend's in too much.
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:44 AM


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Revenge Full Of Lust said:
I think the nose just blend's in too much.


Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:48 AM


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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!
The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!
Heya!January 10, 2022 12:27 PM


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Eternity said:
I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!
The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!


Thank you!
I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:09 PM


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Now she just looks like a thick calved gym bro
EDIT: Fixed her... again-

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS
Heya!January 11, 2022 12:22 PM


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I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick
Heya!January 11, 2022 12:23 PM


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Vanilla Latte said:
I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick


It's more of a style choice makin' them curvy!
I appreciate you taking the time to comment! I appreciate it so so so much! <333 ^///^

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