Wolf Play : I tried to draw and need some feedback

06:21:57 Reaper / Grim

Daze
I was about to say, I still own your hands

06:21:11 Space Pirate Captain

Urux

Yeah. You get it. XD

06:14:59 Stray, LT | H/H

Urux,

Lmao

Urux

06:14:38 Urox, Uris

Vah
Exactly lol. You have to make sure others know the little tid bits of info but you want to keep enough secret so that some stuff is a surprise.

Stray
OHH okay haha I thought you'd some how hurt your hand. Glad to know it's just being held hostage

06:13:10 Space Pirate Captain

Cae

Oh that's not bad at all.

06:12:59 Stray, LT | H/H

Urux,

My boyfriend decided that he was going to seize one of my hands and force me to pet him so I had to type one-handed for a while >.>

06:11:31 Space Pirate Captain

Urux

Exactly! And like, how cryptic do you be without... being too cryptic? But like, the symbolism?

It's harder for a RP too--

06:10:59 Cae, Blue

final born to lost ratio:
65:91

better than i thought :o

Urux

06:10:25 Urox, Uris

Vah
xD It's hard because you have to string together a bunch of things and make it all work together for a prophecy

Stray
What happened to your hands?

Reaper
Thank you ^^ I'm so comfy lol

Cae
Good lord. I've been not so active - exploring and breeding for the past...eek 2 months. I'm going to lose all my good breeders and explore wolves soon.

06:07:43 Cae, Blue

urux, ive been busy the whole day! >.< also been too busy to breed before winter 3rd last game year >.< i even considered skipping breeding altogether but alas, chat said do it, which i am now happy about because 91 litter was a price to pay for one hh pup LOL

06:07:29 Stray, LT | H/H

I regained my hands

The gods have blessed me

06:06:38 Space Pirate Captain

Urux

Same. Same honestly. Give me a solid plot? I can do that.

A prohpecy?? Nah. It's like a kindergarten kid spat some sentences out.

Stray
... gimme a hot second and I'll send it to you.

06:06:24 Reaper / Grim

Urux
Haha, I feel that! Good that you have a heating blanket though!

Urux

06:05:37 Urox, Uris

Cae
91?! Good lord, you are something else

Reaper
I'm alright, tired and cold lol. Just getting in some RP replies before I pass out haha.
I do have an electric blanket tonight though so I'm a lot cozier >:)

06:05:31 Cae, Blue

thanks! its the 2nd hh ive ever bred :D

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06:21:57 Reaper / Grim

Daze
I was about to say, I still own your hands

06:21:11 Space Pirate Captain

Urux

Yeah. You get it. XD

06:14:59 Stray, LT | H/H

Urux,

Lmao

Urux

06:14:38 Urox, Uris

06:13:10 Space Pirate Captain

Cae

Oh that's not bad at all.

06:12:59 Stray, LT | H/H

Urux,

My boyfriend decided that he was going to seize one of my hands and force me to pet him so I had to type one-handed for a while >.>

06:11:31 Space Pirate Captain

Urux

Exactly! And like, how cryptic do you be without... being too cryptic? But like, the symbolism?

It's harder for a RP too--

06:10:59 Cae, Blue

final born to lost ratio:
65:91

better than i thought :o

Urux

06:10:25 Urox, Uris

06:07:43 Cae, Blue

06:07:29 Stray, LT | H/H

I regained my hands

The gods have blessed me

06:06:38 Space Pirate Captain

Urux

Same. Same honestly. Give me a solid plot? I can do that.

A prohpecy?? Nah. It's like a kindergarten kid spat some sentences out.

Stray
... gimme a hot second and I'll send it to you.

06:06:24 Reaper / Grim

Urux
Haha, I feel that! Good that you have a heating blanket though!

Urux

06:05:37 Urox, Uris

06:05:31 Cae, Blue

thanks! its the 2nd hh ive ever bred :D

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August 4, 2020 05:50 PM

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Hello, i was bored and decided to try my best at art. I believe i was trying to draw a bear XD. Please comment any tips or advice anyone has so i can try to improve.

Heres the wanna be bear XD:

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Any advice would be greatly appreciated

Edit: heres some new stuff that i just made that i really enjoyed making. Same rules apply give me some feedback please :)

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second attempt at an animal this is a puppy :)

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at least it should be XD

Edited at August 8, 2020 09:51 PM by Akugitsune328

August 4, 2020 05:53 PM

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I really like what you have here, maybe try looking at references of bears to assist in a more realistic approach. If you're going for a more cartoonish one, then more aesthetic style perhaps? Very good though.

August 4, 2020 06:11 PM

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Aww its adorable <3

I would do as Frigid suggested and use a reference photo. It will give you an idea of which direction the fur lays, there the eyes are in proportion to the nose, mouth, etc. I would also reccomend learning how to shade and highlight based on reference photos. You can make a white blob look 3d and realistic if you shade it right ^^

Another tip is to upload your reference photo into whatever art program you are using, preferably in a different tab so that you can use the color picker tool (The eyedropper thing) to use the exact colors from the image. It will save you time trying to get the colors to match and will also be most accurate.

You can also use this reference photo to sketch out your image by creating layers and lowering the opacity of the photo, then drawing on the layer above it, But obviously make sure to either credit the reference photo or change your sketch enough to prevent any accidental theft.

Hope this helps! I would post links to a few helpful videos but I don't know if that goes against the hotlinking rules, so if you want them I can PM them to you!

Edit: One other thing, Wolf Play requires you to put your pack # on your artwork so that you are easily identifiable, for theft protection. They do not accept artist signitures because they can't possibly memorize them all. Don't be suprized if your photo gets mod-edit removed for lack of proper crediting. You can fix this by simply adding on your pack # under your signiture or somewhere it is visable ^^

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Edited at August 4, 2020 06:17 PM by Viviren

August 5, 2020 12:18 AM

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I think you should blend your colors more. Im talking about the oragne and white lines on the nose and fur. Blend those together, otherwise im not rlly an artist so everything else is up to you.

August 5, 2020 10:27 AM