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Although I think it was Hunter, he looks familiar :)
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I just took a look at the news page so and your wolf isn't up. It must have been yesterday...in that case I'm not sure you will ever know
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I just got an email from the game about one of my wolves being spotlighted on the News Page, how do I check which wolf got spotlighted??
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Does anyone have a brindle male I can breed? If so pm me! IÂ’ll pay anywhere from 1-80 mush (rarity score depending. For ref. The female IÂ’m using has a rarity of 42.. IÂ’d like to keep it relatively close)
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I love wolf party
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01:46:28 Graves | Chaos
Her ENTIRE litter has a boost. 0.0

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:O
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12:56:41 hana, they/them
im never choosing dare again.
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Would definitely be careful with that
 hanahaki.
12:54:22 hana, they/them
salem

it was a truth or dare and i chose dare, they told me to ask chat who am i in a random game but i could pick the game. they had to go home though
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12:51:12 Cy, love
I need her to pop so I can go to bed
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12:50:32 Mag/Maggy
I need a new wolf <.>
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Hana
I don't think WP can tell you that
 hanahaki.
12:49:33 hana, they/them
paws?
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 hanahaki.
12:48:46 hana, they/them
who..am i?..
 Salem
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Iruna
I don't think this was mentioned, but you could make your own 1x1 thread? Could find people who meet your own requirements easier that way I think :P
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oooooof course hah
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12:45:23 Cy, love
Buck
Yep usually how it seems to work

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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:36 PM


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AHHH
This sentence is kinda confusing:
Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.
What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:39 PM


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Hmm, my problem is I wanna explain but not make it a sob story. Lemme try something real quick
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:51 PM


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Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in less fortunate situations, similar to ones I have been in. Situations that if I had not been lucky enough to be taken in by my adoptive mother, I could have easily fallen victim to.
Does that sound better or shorten?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 09:03 PM


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AHHH
This sentence is kinda confusing:
Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.
What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 09:03 PM


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sorry for the double
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 09:04 PM


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It sounds AMAZING
Just try to shorten it as much as you can :)
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 11:20 PM


Sir Froggington

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Something that could help is if you have a short anecdote where you put into practice what you are saying in this essay. It'll bring the point home stronger.

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