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 Zeraphia
07:30:59 Vah is Vah
Tea

XDD I mean my gallery; -WP Click- Has most of what I've done so far.
 Mirko
07:29:09 Mir
Zeraphina
Oo, it's so pretty! Love the purple background
 The Tea Drinkers
07:28:29 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
I'm going to lick your open eye if you don't share more art immediately
 The Tea Drinkers
07:28:02 Tea, Tea Queen
Mir
definitely I quite enjoyed it until I hit the wall at the bottom
 Zeraphia
07:27:44 Vah is Vah
-Click-

Slowly but surely, getting somewhere.
 Mirko
07:27:03 Mir
Tea
Glad to hear :), sounds like it was worth it to an extent lol
 The Tea Drinkers
07:26:20 Tea, Tea Queen
Mir
I will be lol it was my fault for singing and dancing on the stairs 😔
 Mirko
07:25:23 Mir
Tea
Ouch, you good?
 The Tea Drinkers
07:24:38 Tea, Tea Queen
just fell down the stairs 10/10 would recommend
 BellJake
07:22:42 Don't call me BJ.
@Tonneoshet
No do giggle and kick your feet, I don't wanna giggle and kick my feet alone </3
 Rogue Turkey
07:19:41 Rogue is a Ghost
Phoenix Wing sneezes a bee out of their nose.


Mood: Goofy

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 Rogue Turkey
07:18:15 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Tonneoshet
07:16:45 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Bjake
Giggling and kicking my feet /J
 BellJake
07:15:50 Don't call me BJ.
@Tonneoshet
Likewise, if you ever need to vent, my pm's are always open <3
 Tonneoshet
07:13:06 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Bjake
Just doing my best like everyone else haha. Pms will always be open to ya mate.

I'm dreading tomorrow since I gotta go back to work. But I guess once I get paid it won't be so bad
 BellJake
07:11:58 Don't call me BJ.
@Tonneoshet
You're so nice
QwQ
 Tonneoshet
07:10:51 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Bjake
I offer you the biggest bear hug I can muster. I'm here for you man, even if I'm broke too I'm sure we can get through it together TwT
 Aaron Burr Sir
07:10:49 
That moment when you realize you came back from break on the final day of FMC in the final hours and itÂ’s winter yet you go for the leaderboard for mush😭
 BellJake
07:09:24 Don't call me BJ.
@Tonneoshet
Bro, you have no idea, my life is like the titanic sinking right now
;^;
I got so many more problems going on :'0
 Winter Rose
07:08:54 Rose/wints
I got two girls in labor now the waiting game

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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:36 PM


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AHHH
This sentence is kinda confusing:
Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.
What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:39 PM


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Hmm, my problem is I wanna explain but not make it a sob story. Lemme try something real quick
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:51 PM


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Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in less fortunate situations, similar to ones I have been in. Situations that if I had not been lucky enough to be taken in by my adoptive mother, I could have easily fallen victim to.
Does that sound better or shorten?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 09:03 PM


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AHHH
This sentence is kinda confusing:
Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.
What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 09:03 PM


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sorry for the double
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 09:04 PM


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It sounds AMAZING
Just try to shorten it as much as you can :)
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 11:20 PM


Sir Froggington

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Something that could help is if you have a short anecdote where you put into practice what you are saying in this essay. It'll bring the point home stronger.

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