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 technoblade
05:53:44 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

yeah my friends through me into a 1v1v1v1 and that's how I learned with them explaining cards if I needed help.
 Transcendence
05:53:29 anti gen ai
More pvps anyone?
 Zeraphia
05:51:50 Vah hoards mushies
Techno

Ooof I can barely follow DnD. That--oof. That'd lose me so fast.

It's cool that you've got it down though!
 technoblade
05:49:04 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

yeah there is a lot that happens in one turn.

-Click-
 Zeraphia
05:47:35 Vah hoards mushies
Techno

Oooh that's fun! I'd definitely be the type of person to need the turn card. I get lost so much.
 technoblade
05:45:54 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

yeah we got him his first one and I walked him through my entire main deck (to which he is terrified to play against) and slowly he is gaining an understanding of what to do. I need to get him the card that lays out the turn steps.
 Zeraphia
05:43:09 Vah hoards mushies
Techno

That's impressive honestly. I'm just wondering XD

I know vaguely about MTG, haven't played it myself.
 technoblade
05:42:38 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

Oh I have those too, but thankfully I do not see them often so it works out.

I have been playing MTG for over a year I think and have 10 different decks, plus I have knowledge of playing mono colour all the way to 5 colour decks. Why?
 Salem
05:42:17 Witchz
Reaper
Awesome awesome >:3
 Dont Fear The Reaper
05:41:37 Reaper / Grim
Trials
I'll DM you a list then :3

Of course! I love getting nicknames, makes me feel loved lmao.
 Salem
05:40:41 Witchz
Reaper,
No theme, just a pretty name :P

For sure :0 Can I give you a nickname too then? It'd have to be later because I can't think of anything right now ^^"
 Zeraphia
05:40:02 Vah hoards mushies
Techno

Ahh, I can do that. It's nice at least to get along with coworkers rather than having them be the bane of your existence.

How extensive is your MTG collection?
 Dont Fear The Reaper
05:39:37 Reaper / Grim
Salem
Two things!
1) Do you have a theme you're going for? Like for the wolf names.
2) ...Can I call you trials? Cause the Salem witch trials? I actually have been to Salem, kinda like it there lol
 technoblade
05:38:20 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

Nah no help needed, just an ear to listen. He's a great guy honestly and I have already promised to wipe the floor with him in the card game I'm teaching him MTG. He thinks he can win.

Ah yes it is like jumbling a hat around and pulling random papers with personality traits.
 Zeraphia
05:35:51 Vah hoards mushies
Techno

Ahh, that makes more sense. I don't entirely know how to help on that one ^^'

I might see if I can't rewrite the personality to be a bit more coherent. But man, shuffling songs for personality is a wild ride and I think it's hilarious.
 Salem
05:34:40 Witchz
Name ideas?
-WP Click-

If you have a lot you can PM me :P or if you're stalking chat but have some ideas anyways
 technoblade
05:34:28 Lil Techy | Techno
Zera

Oh no he's great, absolutely love working with him and all, it's me that's the problem currently. Having a long distance partner + someone closer you sort of click with more = not so good judgement.

That character is cute and hey if anything start fresh, wipe him clean and start from the beginning.
 Zeraphia
05:30:22 Vah hoards mushies
Katy

There you go XD

Techno

Oh that's fun, yeah. The type of person is... the problem, I assume?

I mean, he's cute and all;
-Click-

An absolute mess personality wise XD
 STS
05:30:20 TS, Speckles
Techno. I mean fair, understable, Hey im not the best either, Look at this
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I would not call it perfection, just random decor stuck together xD
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Votes?
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Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 12:41 PM


TKO

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you



Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:48 PM


Lucifer

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ok so the last attempt looks great!
the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?
the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:51 PM


Nez.ity

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:52 PM


TKO

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Please do

Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.


Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:53 PM


Nez.ity

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:57 PM


TKO

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!
That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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