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 LeafClan
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Zefhyr less chance of the wolf being taken by the weekly death script is what that feather does!
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ps. what does the black feather usually do, i wonder...??
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all my battle wolves are so old, oops.
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When you have 47x4 days explore days xD
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Ma'am
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Go into labor. I have a feather. I want to use it

Release the duds
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:(
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 LeafClan
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Spoil me Nesta please!!
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 LeafClan
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Zefhyr I would if I had any sorry for your loss.
 Whispering Rain
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How are you Nester? Haven't seen you in ages
 ZefhyrMaracaibo
02:42:37 
The black feather did not prolong life for my dominant female. *sigh* :( pls. give her a rose...
 LeafClan
02:42:31 Leaf she/her
Nesta I want decor and mush please spoil me!
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Emmet
She is just having a bad day maybee
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Leaf
Giving them decor and mush

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I know, I am so excited. I still need to pack though and that is stressing me out lol. I need to do so much in so little time
 LeafClan
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Nesta how are you spoiling people in chat also I am gonna die I want black angel wings for my HH............
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Critique?June 17, 2018 01:25 PM


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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:30 PM


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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:31 PM


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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:39 PM


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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:54 PM


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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!
Critique?June 21, 2018 05:37 PM


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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!
Critique?June 22, 2018 11:30 PM


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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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