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 Voxtexy
01:16:52 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
I'm glad you like some of 'em! I'd love to see the customs that they get used for, if they get used! c:

One of them is based on one of my customs, though he can't breed anymore so I really don't mind annd I likely won't use it unless I somehow get another blind DH bred in my pack
 Continental Wolves
01:13:22 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vox
:0 definitely using some of those designs
 Voxtexy
01:12:27 Vox, Corey
I cannot remember if I sent one design before, so i do apologize if it's one you've already seen xD
 Voxtexy
01:11:57 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
Gotcha! I sent ya four designs, all of them are in the alpha female pose :>
 SilverShadow
01:11:33 Ash ☆ Crow
Lullaby for a stormy night by Vienna Teng... I am obsessed 😍
 Continental Wolves
01:09:36 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vox
It'll be for a male custom but probably in the alpha female pose
 The Sigma
01:09:07 Leon, Sigma
Emmet

I can try to help also! :)
 Voxtexy
01:08:33 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
Were you hoping for male or female designs?

I'm sure they can work both ways, but I just wanna make sure I have 'em set for whatever gender you're wantin' 'em to be!
 Continental Wolves
01:07:11 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vox
Please e,e
I can design greyscale no problem but brownscale is the death of me
 starmutt
01:06:22 marsh | they/it
emphasize on kinda lol

@dojeje
paws might look better facing forward? its honestly pretty cute right now
 Continental Wolves
01:05:57 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Leon
I believe its only for a month that has an event and Eve doesn't know what pelt should be released for that months event
 Voxtexy
01:05:33 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
I have a few brownscale customs that somehow work with it. I could link 'em to you :>
 starmutt
01:04:45 marsh | they/it
oh wait exclusive pelt designs. those are kinda monthly. misread thought you meant the boost ones lol
 DojejeTheWolf
01:04:12 Dojeje
How do I fix this?
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 starmutt
01:04:08 marsh | they/it
nah they're sporadic. i only know of the infatuation (February) and the gaelic blood one lol so thats like. 2 out of 12 months
 The Sigma
01:03:13 Leon, Sigma
Chat question:

Do they hold exclusive pelt designs every month? And how come I keep missing out on these chances ToT
 Continental Wolves
01:00:48 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vox
You should come up with a nice custom design for me with a wolverine base, every time I try to make one it looks ugly e,e
 That Grape Guy
01:00:36 Dionysus,Dio,Rosc
its 2 am for me I should be sleeping
 Voxtexy
12:59:02 Vox, Corey
Yepp, Spectre definitely works for some of my existing customs lol
 Voxtexy
12:58:21 Vox, Corey
I have so many custom designs saved, I bet I have a few that can work with both of them xD

Might even work for one of my current customs honestly

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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