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03:09:49 River, they/them

Thanks! That sounds really cool!

03:08:03 Jack, Boo, Vapor

river

what about Selene who was the original moon goddess in Greek myth

02:58:43 River, they/them

I'd love names similar to Artemis or with a mythological feel!

02:57:34 Jack, Boo, Vapor

river

any particular theme?

02:55:42 River, they/them

Oh sorry! -WP Click-

02:53:38 Jack, Boo, Vapor

River

broken link

02:49:40 River, they/them

*names

02:49:29 River, they/them

-WP Click- for her?

02:40:51 Jack, Boo, Vapor

-Click-

surprisingly enough I have yet to hate this drawing and I have been staring at it for nearly an hour

02:38:43

Forest
I know the feeling. I never seem to finish me teams

02:24:01

Forest
I know the feeling. I never seem to finish me teams

Forest Dwelling

02:02:04 I am on Wolflocke ok

Back down to an explore team of 5 only 2 days after I started BE training a 6th. So funny how this has happened 3 times in a row now...

01:58:38 Tears, Pink, Pinkie

Goodnight chat people

01:58:26 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Wander

ohh he's beautiful

01:55:47 Wander

-Click-
This is mine. He's Disco, Yellowbelly, Hidden Gene Woma, Pastel, Granite

01:53:33 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Wander

ball pythons are beautiful when they have color changing genes

01:48:38 Wander

That's really cool!! I think ball pythons are the best examples for color changing genes like that. And yeah the game is just bugged on a few wolves

01:48:24 Tears, Pink, Pinkie

Fei

Due to some things I can't really distance myself from him right now but I may honestly just ask him how his girlfriend is at some point and just ask about her, I feel like it could go 50/50 but I can't really distance myself from him (not saying I'm forcing myself against my will to talk to him) and honestly if he thinks I'm trying to hit on him then I can just say I like someone or something

Honestly it's been interesting to see, I quite literally could make a list of his weird behavior and actions since we split

01:46:50 Jack, Boo, Vapor

wander
technically in real life some animals can have multiple pelt changing defects

my neighbor used to have a cat that was Chimera and Viti which was very cool

but in this game its just a bug that makes it look like two pelt changing defects

01:44:29 Wander

I've seen a few wolves recently that have more than one pelt changing defect

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

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Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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