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 Rainbow River
03:09:49 River, they/them
Thanks! That sounds really cool!
 Jack-A-Boo
03:08:03 Jack, Boo, Vapor
river

what about Selene who was the original moon goddess in Greek myth
 Rainbow River
02:58:43 River, they/them
I'd love names similar to Artemis or with a mythological feel!
 Jack-A-Boo
02:57:34 Jack, Boo, Vapor
river

any particular theme?
 Rainbow River
02:55:42 River, they/them
Oh sorry! -WP Click-
 Jack-A-Boo
02:53:38 Jack, Boo, Vapor
River

broken link
 Rainbow River
02:49:40 River, they/them
*names
 Rainbow River
02:49:29 River, they/them
-WP Click- for her?
 Jack-A-Boo
02:40:51 Jack, Boo, Vapor
-Click-

surprisingly enough I have yet to hate this drawing and I have been staring at it for nearly an hour
 Nyx Ignis
02:38:43 
Forest
I know the feeling. I never seem to finish me teams
 Nyx Ignis
02:24:01 
Forest
I know the feeling. I never seem to finish me teams
 Forest Dwelling
02:02:04 I am on Wolflocke ok
Back down to an explore team of 5 only 2 days after I started BE training a 6th. So funny how this has happened 3 times in a row now...
 Pink Tears
01:58:38 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
Goodnight chat people
 Jack-A-Boo
01:58:26 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Wander

ohh he's beautiful
 Malcuth
01:55:47 Wander
-Click-
This is mine. He's Disco, Yellowbelly, Hidden Gene Woma, Pastel, Granite
 Jack-A-Boo
01:53:33 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Wander

ball pythons are beautiful when they have color changing genes
 Malcuth
01:48:38 Wander
That's really cool!! I think ball pythons are the best examples for color changing genes like that. And yeah the game is just bugged on a few wolves
 Pink Tears
01:48:24 Tears, Pink, Pinkie
Fei

Due to some things I can't really distance myself from him right now but I may honestly just ask him how his girlfriend is at some point and just ask about her, I feel like it could go 50/50 but I can't really distance myself from him (not saying I'm forcing myself against my will to talk to him) and honestly if he thinks I'm trying to hit on him then I can just say I like someone or something

Honestly it's been interesting to see, I quite literally could make a list of his weird behavior and actions since we split
 Jack-A-Boo
01:46:50 Jack, Boo, Vapor
wander
technically in real life some animals can have multiple pelt changing defects

my neighbor used to have a cat that was Chimera and Viti which was very cool

but in this game its just a bug that makes it look like two pelt changing defects
 Malcuth
01:44:29 Wander
I've seen a few wolves recently that have more than one pelt changing defect

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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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