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 Burning Roses
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Oo nice
 Saint
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copied the wrong thing sorry
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wait

10k: 8,670 Mushroom
 Saint
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im so close to my 10k goal
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 Burning Roses
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The quests and slither are a great way to get mushrooms, makes it a lot easier
 Saint
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i have so many saving holes, and one is solely mush from slither and it has 2k, another one i made is quest money gained from completing quest, but i have some sorta hard quest so thats on hold
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That's not terrible, definitely a pretty good start
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this is my current
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Saint

Yea, that's fair, I'm sure you'll be able to figure something out. Could probably get a few apples with mush and then rest with card or something perhaps
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roses, yeah i was trying with mush because i cant get them with money but ive never customized a wolf and really want to so i might have to take out 20 and get one of those prepaid cards if it works, or not i could ask my partner to use her card... i dont know, i just want a blue woof
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Especially now, if you planned on buying them with mush and not actual money. Hopefully you're able to save up enough, she'd look really nice ^^
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i was gonna customize this girl with the event dye but it turns out its hard to get 45 apples lmao
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I want to retire him but he is heavy weight.
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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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