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 technoblade
08:37:13 Lil Techy | Techno
Fawn

I had something similar but not as severe, 100% would not recommend. I am glad it went away though.
 BuggyOs
08:36:53 Bugfood
I hope the pain doesnt return!
 BuggyOs
08:35:54 Bugfood
Fawn
I have a cyst in my wrist that occasionally causes me pain just like that. Your doctor shouldve noticed something like that though
 Fawn
08:35:21 Twistie
zero stars do not recommend. however it literally just. went away. one night and i had full pain-free range of motion like nothing ever happened.
 Fawn
08:34:44 Twistie
not 100% sure. doctor said it was tendonitis and nothing showed up on xrays but i had like zero range of motion and it hurt so bad, wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy. during the summer it hurt badly enough that I had to wear a brace for two weeks but this time I had to brace it and ice it nightly for over a month.
 technoblade
08:33:10 Lil Techy | Techno
fawn

what happened to your wrist?
 Fawn
08:32:31 Twistie
thanks so much guys! i haven't had time to draw anything in forever, plus the last time i wanted to draw my wrist pain was too bad. But now I'm debating what to draw next lol
 Nyx Ignis
08:31:27 
Eve
ah okay i keep forgeting what account I'm on lol
 technoblade
08:31:12 Lil Techy | Techno
fawn

that is gorgeous!
 BuggyOs
08:30:35 Bugfood
Fawn
Thats a DOODLE? its so pretty oml
 Forest Dwelling
08:30:20 I am on Wolflocke ok
@Fawn

That's so gorgeous!
 Fawn
08:29:13 Twistie
-Click-
 Forest Dwelling
08:27:52 I am on Wolflocke ok
@Fawn

I would!
 technoblade
08:27:43 Lil Techy | Techno
me!
 Fawn
08:27:25 Twistie
would anyone like to see a horse doodle
 technoblade
08:26:25 Lil Techy | Techno
forest

ooo you are getting up there in territory levels
 Forest Dwelling
08:24:28 I am on Wolflocke ok
@Techno

I've already explored a bit of the swamp, though I'm still on lvl 1 since the forest is more profitable/has more prey
 MLadySkylar
08:23:45 P'Sky
But Bye Chat-
I thought I was feeling social but I'm so tired from all the shopping>>
I hope everyone has a good day/night.
I seriously need a nap
 technoblade
08:23:10 Lil Techy | Techno
wait*
 StarRun
08:23:07 
Wait so you'll get rid of defects T-T

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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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