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My orthodontists wanted to surgically break my jaw to fix my teeth and my mom said no, and so I was in braces for 6 years instead. Mu overbite is back, my teeth bite into my lips constantly but insurance wont cover braces again
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To my memory they did as soon as they were able whenever it happened. But they couldn't always do it right away. They eventually gave me this waxy thing that I would have to put on the tip of the wire to make it not make deep and bad holes in my cheeks.
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I don't know what the effect would be, you would just try to make it as even as possible each time
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My teeth have just about moved back because I couldn't wear my retainer. My wisdom teeth came in during covid and my retainer stopped fitting but it took a while to get an appointment so all the money on braces went down the drain :/
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I have a little bag of them. And some are cut so they look more like a tube than a circle, and I wonder if that would have an uneven effect 🤔.

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The wires also often came/slid fully out of the last couple braces quite often and I would get holes in my cheeks from that :/

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thats kinda funny. I had rubberbands with my braces and they were so thick
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It was just a small invisalign rubber band. I had been playing with it from time to time. It stayed in place, but I noticed there was one line instead of two.
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ArtJune 29, 2019 01:23 PM


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Thinking of making an art shop soon so I can start over, after I come back from travelling and taking a break for my health

So I kind of like my art but at the same time fucking hate it. Please critique. Please price. Please just say whatever it is you want to say about my art, I don't care, anything helps 👌👌

Thanks my dudes c:

Have some examples [(c) 181238 for all]
https://i.postimg.cc/Kz7TFpKY/1561476031356.png
https://i.postimg.cc/wBQxjCkn/1561570981685.png
https://i.postimg.cc/0NRrQd1K/1560976296043.png
https://i.postimg.cc/wBXMsy9f/1561054799620.png
https://i.postimg.cc/kXSm4rJw/1561212440345.png
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:33 PM


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* Boop*


I don't like your art and I do at the same time. Does that make sense? I feel like you could do better, I don't mean CHANGE your art completely but maybe do more unique styles, like maybe a wolf/dog with no hind legs you know real defects/injuries/ect.

I do like your art, and to me I kinda feel happy looking at it :) I would pay at least 500-800( Depends on how long it takes and what type of crazy colors they want) mush, I believe you Five( Or Cun) can go far beyond what your aiming at. I'm also trying to do better with my Art, so maybe my words don't really count ;\ as anything.


But I would maybe try new styles of drawing, maybe different and deformed poses..you know what WP is like :D
-BL

P.S Hope I helped <-<.
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:38 PM


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I'd love to constructively critique your drawings' anatomy, if I may. Perhaps look at references and draw from what you see. This can apply whether you're going for a realistic or simplified look. It's easier to simplify realistic references, and use them as a "skeleton" to help with anatomy. Hope this helps c;

(By the way, you may fully and absolutely correct me if I assume or observe something wrong.)
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:39 PM


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I personally prefer your older style compared to the new one.

This:

https://i.postimg.cc/76r99S5R/IMG-0677.png

Just seems a bit more signature than this:

https://i.postimg.cc/hPHhLbpq/6-C0-B60-C8-0-B18-40-FF-A5-CF-7-EF38997-CFEE.png

Just looking back at your older style I like it more. (Although I do love the piece you did of Lieutenant. That face is adorable *^*)
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:44 PM


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I love your art

However, there are some things that could be improved in my opinion.


The legs, firstly. In some pieces they look like they don't have any bones in them. There's not enough sharper angles, and in some pieces the joints are way too thin.

Secondly, the colouring/shading. If I'm brutally honest it kinda just looks like streaky lines. It doesn't look 3D. I'd be happy to help on this, even though I'm really not very experienced. I can also recommend some tutorials if you need them <3

Also, avoid shading with black and blurring it. Unless it's for a background/out of focus area, you don't really want blurry shading/colouring.

I hope this helps! And I do really like your art, and I admire how you're able to draw just about anything. But I would really recommend sitting down, browsing through DA (artists like KFCemployee) and looking at their techniques and referencing stock images. I know you're often swamped with commissions, but find some time to make art for yourself and focus on improving it ^^
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:46 PM


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Bilx said:
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I don't like your art and I do at the same time. Does that make sense? I feel like you could do better, I don't mean CHANGE your art completely but maybe do more unique styles, like maybe a wolf/dog with no hind legs you know real defects/injuries/ect.

I do like your art, and to me I kinda feel happy looking at it :) I would pay at least 500-800( Depends on how long it takes and what type of crazy colors they want) mush, I believe you Five( Or Cun) can go far beyond what your aiming at. I'm also trying to do better with my Art, so maybe my words don't really count ;\ as anything.


But I would maybe try new styles of drawing, maybe different and deformed poses..you know what WP is like :D
-BL

P.S Hope I helped <-<.


Thank you so much, noted <3

Good luck on your own art journey!




Cardinal said:
I'd love to constructively critique your drawings' anatomy, if I may. Perhaps look at references and draw from what you see. This can apply whether you're going for a realistic or simplified look. It's easier to simplify realistic references, and use them as a "skeleton" to help with anatomy. Hope this helps c;

(By the way, you may fully and absolutely correct me if I assume or observe something wrong.)


Critique away please <3
I will definitely look at references, that's 100% on my to-do list ^^
Also, nope, there's no correcting you here c;




Lt. Chick Fil A said:
I personally prefer your older style compared to the new one.

This:

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Just seems a bit more signature than this:

[Link]

Just looking back at your older style I like it more. (Although I do love the piece you did of Lieutenant. That face is adorable *^*)


Do you mean the cheek floofs or the fur style?
I'll think about the fur style but I'm not sure about the cheek floofs :/ I mean yes they were what made my art unique but I'm not a fan of them much anymore.

But if you really want the floofs to return I may think about doing a revised version of them ^^
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:48 PM


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I somewhat agree with Lil Lt.
Your old style was a nice signature that even without a credential on your art, I'd be able to tell it was yours. The newer style you've developed is also lovely, and I definitely need a commission of Lynx from you eventually *^* but besides that everything else is fine. Since you do backgrounds and your art is detailed, price wise I'd stay stick to 100+ mush per piece, as the quality is great. Definitely pm me once that art shop is made, so I can hippity hoppity into there and get some commissioned art from you
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:48 PM


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Mavi said:
I love your art

However, there are some things that could be improved in my opinion.


The legs, firstly. In some pieces they look like they don't have any bones in them. There's not enough sharper angles, and in some pieces the joints are way too thin.

Secondly, the colouring/shading. If I'm brutally honest it kinda just looks like streaky lines. It doesn't look 3D. I'd be happy to help on this, even though I'm really not very experienced. I can also recommend some tutorials if you need them <3

Also, avoid shading with black and blurring it. Unless it's for a background/out of focus area, you don't really want blurry shading/colouring.

I hope this helps! And I do really like your art, and I admire how you're able to draw just about anything. But I would really recommend sitting down, browsing through DA (artists like KFCemployee) and looking at their techniques and referencing stock images. I know you're often swamped with commissions, but find some time to make art for yourself and focus on improving it ^^


Thank you! Honestly, if you're interested in showing/recommending some artists/references to me, that would be a huge help *^*

It really is the lines/fur as you say is what I hate about my art, it looks like I put no effort into it ^^'

Thanks so much! I'm going to spend all of summer revising, redrawing and practising ^-^

Edited at June 29, 2019 01:49 PM by Five.
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:48 PM


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Wolffang said:
I somewhat agree with Lil Lt.
Your old style was a nice signature that even without a credential on your art, I'd be able to tell it was yours. The newer style you've developed is also lovely, and I definitely need a commission of Lynx from you eventually *^* but besides that everything else is fine. Since you do backgrounds and your art is detailed, price wise I'd stay stick to 100+ mush per piece, as the quality is great. Definitely pm me once that art shop is made, so I can hippity hoppity into there and get some commissioned art from you


Thank you!! C:
ArtJune 29, 2019 01:51 PM


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Both. The cheek floof made your art unique from everyone else's. And lots of people seem to be able to do that type of fur style. It just seems like a more generic path in my opinion. And who don't love the cheek floofs?
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