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good morning!
 Salem
02:53:46 Floating pencil
Support?
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 DoggPuk3
02:03:45 Dogg/Pukester
Im gonna head off for the night
Goodnight chat<3
 DoggPuk3
02:03:12 Dogg/Pukester
WHatever you do friend please just be safe
These games are very comforting too! maybe you can find something to calm you here
Remember that the grass grows green after the storm
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:59:57 Bau
I know T°T
At this point I might just go walk into a wheat field until sunrise....
 DoggPuk3
01:58:37 Dogg/Pukester
Bau
Ugh thats the worst feeling, makes you feel even more trapped in your anger
 Gardiens Brisés Pack
01:57:10 Lotus/Lucca
I finally watched Wicked *^* as someone who isn't a big fan of musicals, it wasn't bad
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:56:30 Bau
Usually it's an option but it's late at night and my town isn't safe at night- usually I'd play badminton but the place I go to is closed and doesn't open till Monday which is essentially tomorrow at my current time
 DoggPuk3
01:55:17 Dogg/Pukester
But I do wish you luck in finding whatever suits you and I hope you get better soon
I understand that heavy seething feeling that sits on your chest and makes your muscles tighten and your mind become tunnel vision on that one thing
 DoggPuk3
01:54:00 Dogg/Pukester
Whew im not sure I have good advice either, I get very heated too and it usually involves me scream cussing at whatever or whoever, so what I do to try my best to avoid that is screaming as hard and delebrite as you can into a pillow, drawing while listening to music
pretty much all i got :/ since running isnt an option
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:52:31 Bau
^^
 DoggPuk3
01:51:44 Dogg/Pukester
Oh! Okay I understand
I had to make sure I had read your message right XD
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:51:32 Bau
I'm angry because of something else...
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:50:50 Bau
I need to productively work off extreme rage. I despise being angry in the slightest and my usual answer is not valid and I'm lacking a way to work off the anger
 DoggPuk3
01:50:07 Dogg/Pukester
You are wanting to blow off steam because of badminton?? :o
 DoggPuk3
01:49:45 Dogg/Pukester
Wait, Im trying to decipher what youre saying
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:47:32 Bau
Question
Does anyone know how to blow of steam as someone who only knows how to play badminton?? that and running is not an option Genuinely I need answers :')
 Salem
01:46:32 Floating pencil
Yes it is :3
 DoggPuk3
01:45:41 Dogg/Pukester
okay fineee we will go with yes
 DoggPuk3
01:45:22 Dogg/Pukester
Apparently the sun exploded cause what is this...
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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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