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 -Sweet-Poison-
01:59:57 Bau
I know T°T
At this point I might just go walk into a wheat field until sunrise....
 DoggPuk3
01:58:37 Dogg/Pukester
Bau
Ugh thats the worst feeling, makes you feel even more trapped in your anger
 Gardiens Brisés Pack
01:57:10 Lotus/Lucca
I finally watched Wicked *^* as someone who isn't a big fan of musicals, it wasn't bad
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:56:30 Bau
Usually it's an option but it's late at night and my town isn't safe at night- usually I'd play badminton but the place I go to is closed and doesn't open till Monday which is essentially tomorrow at my current time
 DoggPuk3
01:55:17 Dogg/Pukester
But I do wish you luck in finding whatever suits you and I hope you get better soon
I understand that heavy seething feeling that sits on your chest and makes your muscles tighten and your mind become tunnel vision on that one thing
 DoggPuk3
01:54:00 Dogg/Pukester
Whew im not sure I have good advice either, I get very heated too and it usually involves me scream cussing at whatever or whoever, so what I do to try my best to avoid that is screaming as hard and delebrite as you can into a pillow, drawing while listening to music
pretty much all i got :/ since running isnt an option
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:52:31 Bau
^^
 DoggPuk3
01:51:44 Dogg/Pukester
Oh! Okay I understand
I had to make sure I had read your message right XD
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:51:32 Bau
I'm angry because of something else...
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:50:50 Bau
I need to productively work off extreme rage. I despise being angry in the slightest and my usual answer is not valid and I'm lacking a way to work off the anger
 DoggPuk3
01:50:07 Dogg/Pukester
You are wanting to blow off steam because of badminton?? :o
 DoggPuk3
01:49:45 Dogg/Pukester
Wait, Im trying to decipher what youre saying
 -Sweet-Poison-
01:47:32 Bau
Question
Does anyone know how to blow of steam as someone who only knows how to play badminton?? that and running is not an option Genuinely I need answers :')
 Salem
01:46:32 Floating pencil
Yes it is :3
 DoggPuk3
01:45:41 Dogg/Pukester
okay fineee we will go with yes
 DoggPuk3
01:45:22 Dogg/Pukester
Apparently the sun exploded cause what is this...
-Click-
 Salem
01:42:09 Floating pencil
There's no or
 Salem
01:41:45 Floating pencil
Dogg,
I completely understand that honestly

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 DoggPuk3
01:41:24 Dogg/Pukester
or
 Salem
01:40:52 Floating pencil
Chat, yes or no?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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