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 Kháos
12:34:10 
I hope it's just an allergic reaction. We can't afford the vets.
 Collar
12:33:56 ♰ Vapor ♰
Buggy

Ohhh my goddd that's so tragic please
We are not beating the "Old as Hell" allegations huh
 BuggyOs
12:33:40 Lurantis
hi Vi!
 BuggyOs
12:33:16 Lurantis
Vapor
I have chronic pain in both my wrists and early arthritis in my knees. We are in our PRIME!
 VioletEcho
12:32:50 Is a dinosaur rawr
I'm back ^^
 Collar
12:32:35 ♰ Vapor ♰
Buggy

*^* We're YOUNG and in our PRIME, trust me bro

(my back hurts oof ouch)
 BuggyOs
12:31:33 Lurantis
Vapor
I'm still a baby to my family, but old compared to folks online </3
 Starlit Clan
12:30:54 
Khaos, when animals suddenly drool a lot, it can be a sign of an allergic reaction or them eating something poisonous. I would call the vet.
 Collar
12:30:51 ♰ Vapor ♰
can't believe 20 is "old" now, I'll cry real big tears
 BuggyOs
12:28:46 Lurantis
Tag
I don't mind being old lmao. I was forced to hang out with younger kids most my life, plus I look younger so many think I'm 16-18. It's a blessing and a curse lmao
 Kháos
12:28:01 
My dogs and I were okay, but I think one of our pups is sick now... never in his life has he drooled before and now he's slobbering everywhere. One dog seems like a stray and is okay but the one with a collar is why I called animal control.
 Crypto Currency
12:26:51 Tag (he/they)
buggy, yep >.>
oldie
 BuggyOs
12:23:25 Lurantis
tag
hahah
so I'm older lmao
 Crypto Currency
12:22:21 Tag (he/they)
buggy, no, I am nearing 19 T-T
 BuggyOs
12:21:21 Lurantis
Tag
I'm 20 lol, are you much older?
 Crypto Currency
12:21:05 Tag (he/they)
khaos, are you and your dogs ok?
 Crypto Currency
12:20:43 Tag (he/they)
buggy, bro I feel old now >.>
 BuggyOs
12:18:20 Lurantis
Khaos
oh no! are their pets okay??
 Kháos
12:18:05 
Wow. Going to take the dogs out turned into having to call animal control on our neighbors. 💔
 BuggyOs
12:17:26 Lurantis
Ky
absolutely, go ahead!

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Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 23, 2024 10:21 PM


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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323


Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 05:36 PM


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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 05:37 PM


Zeraphia

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OH Geez XD
well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3
imma... go eat dinner. XD
Isle of Gold - CommentsMarch 24, 2024 05:51 PM


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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.
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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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