Chatbox
 Purgatory
10:36:38 Purgatorio/Purge
Boe
:') I know I was really telling everyone my plan in chat and then I got lost in the thrill of the unknown. Darn this gambler's lineage, I'm just like granpappy
 Baphomet
10:34:43 As Above So Below
Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 4
Mushrooms: 0
Mushrooms Saved: 0

wait I had 10 apples now I only have 4 and I never spent any
 Collar
10:33:59 ♰ Vapor ♰
Amy

Nawhh, they're all for my 100 paws raffle I'm doing!
 Amygdala
10:33:59 Amy/Anpmygdala
Anyways i poped up real fast but now i gotta work....bye chat
 Boeing
10:33:36 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Purge
I mean I got the idea from you xD
All the 30k mush I had set aside went into apples that day :')
 Amygdala
10:33:28 Amy/Anpmygdala
Vapor
Damn now you are rich
 Collar
10:32:59 ♰ Vapor ♰
Apples: 100
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 2
Mushrooms Saved: 0

😿
 Purgatory
10:32:49 Purgatorio/Purge
Boe
You were smart, sadly I was not and I spent every last mush just to get the boost that turned out to have basically zero resale value. I thought I'd get some apples for my HH duplicate, but I got like 800 mush💀💀 Spent 20k in party to get it though...
 Amygdala
10:31:54 Amy/Anpmygdala
Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 40
Mushrooms: 42
Mushrooms Saved: 0

Hehehehehheeh
 Tropical Pickle
10:30:34 Tropickle
Purge
I wanted to put them in a raffle, but I think the raffle dropdown breaks if you have too many items in your inventory. I think that having over a certain number of items makes the list suddenly go wonky, and items aren't listed in hoard order. So I can't even specifically list my unburied feathers <_>
 Forest Dwelling
10:30:00 I am on Wolflocke ok
Your wolves played: Ignitus snarls viciously at Julia for wandering too close to their pups.

Dude I never even bred you once-
 Boeing
10:29:46 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
this is why I bought all my apples during the party event :')
 Purgatory
10:29:04 Purgatorio/Purge
Same Pickle, i've got 8 myself
 Magnus Bane
10:27:46 Mag/Maggy
Crying:')
 Tropical Pickle
10:26:27 Tropickle
I also have 16 unburied blue jay feathers... now they're all gonna get stolen overnight by RNG -_-
 Collar
10:25:28 ♰ Vapor ♰
Ohhh my god I feel you on that one

I was just gonna go looking to buy apples yesterday too lolol
 Purgatory
10:24:20 Purgatorio/Purge
They only dropped because of the party event, now it's going higher because of the common greed. RIP to our wallets
 Tropical Pickle
10:24:05 Tropickle
I have 10 buckets of junk... hmmm
 Magnus Bane
10:23:50 Mag/Maggy
First time I actually have the mush and want to buy, the prices sky rocket
 Collar
10:23:17 ♰ Vapor ♰
I swear they were like 750 just the other dayy, what HAPPENED lolol

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.
Quests
Alliance Battles
Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances
Grizzly Bear : +5
Coyote : -3
Arctic Fox : +5
    Summer   Day  Weather:  Fog
 


Forums

→ Wolf Play is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following
Forums > Artwork > Art Help
   1 

Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


Ciao

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 4519
#2765951
Give Award

I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 217
#2765965
Give Award

hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


Ciao

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 4519
#2765981
Give Award
Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#2765985
Give Award
Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


Ciao

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 4519
#2765993
Give Award
Thanks, i'll pm you^^

Forums > Artwork > Art Help
   1 

Refresh










Copyright ©2013-2024 Go Go Gatsby Designs, LLC    All Rights Reserved
Terms Of Use  |   Privacy Policy   |   DMCA   |   Contact Us