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 distant-lands
12:31:00 katy | beetle
vah,
oo good luck with the interview :) hope it goes well.

and indeed it does. i was looking for something new for about 6 months? i just hated driving an hour to and from my old job e.o
 Zeraphia
12:29:00 Vah is less okay
Katy

Oh nice! I have another interview on Monday. Job searching sucks.
 BellJake
12:28:59 Don't call me BJ.
-Click-
I'm finally done for today oh thank gods, sleep time
ToT
 hanahaki.
12:28:45 hana, they/them
bye, off to simp for shadow the hedgehog-
 distant-lands
12:26:56 katy | beetle
vah,
that doesn't sound too good. hope things get better!

i'm alright. started my new job on wednesday, pretty tired right now but i have three days off :>
 Zeraphia
12:25:47 Vah is less okay
Katy

About as good as I can be. But y'know.

How are you?
 distant-lands
12:24:39 katy | beetle
vah,
i'm tired otherwise i'd draw her quick :p

how've you been today?
 Zeraphia
12:22:26 Vah is less okay
Katy

I definitely agree
 hanahaki.
12:22:20 hana, they/them
future song lyrics????


for the rest of your life,
i'll be there,
i'll be stuck to your head
like the roots of your hair.
and you'll never get rid of me,
i'll always be there.
even when you don't want me,
i'll be here.
i'll be angry like a dog,
and you'll never believe,
but, im still there.
 distant-lands
12:20:58 katy | beetle
-Click-
so pretty *^*

i need more art of rashi
 Aurelius
12:18:47 Aure,Basil
rip chat
 DuskWeaver
12:06:36 Boo, Vapor (he/Him)
I love how I randomly woke up at 1:00 am XD
 technoblade
12:05:09 Lil Techy | Techno
Vox

it does, and even though I don't have varied line weights anymore I make it work ^^
 Continental Wolves
12:03:51 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
You have logged in 372 days in a row.
 Voxtexy
12:01:15 Vox
I was gonna say smoother/easier, but literally stopped to think about it.

Couldn't figure out wording to save my life xD
 Crooked Magic
12:00:58 Crook, She/her
Just finished watching the Paul vs. Tyson fight.🫡
 Zeraphia
12:00:54 Vah is less okay
Spirit

Ice should bring down the swelling/itchiness a little bit at least.

XD that's the funny thing about medicine... it's there to be used
 Voxtexy
11:59:54 Vox
techno,
Does it just.. feel better to draw that way? I'm not sure how to word it lmaoo
 Spirit of Christmas
11:59:04 Mr palette guy
King of smiles,
Well, Have a nice night. I have to plan christmas tomorrow lol

Vah, just going to sleep and hope its gone in the morning, no point in wasting medicine lol
(Might try to get some ice)
 Magnus Bane
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If someone spits teeth out on me I will instantly start swinging

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


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And the eyes are a little small

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