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I lovee melas! One's my featured wolf right now!
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Anyone here like melas
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Gorgeous dogsss :O
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My one Boost BD buddy kicked the bucket a bit ago.

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These 2 girlies
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All my boost BD are crud but they make pretty babies XD
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Mag

Ooooh that is true. That is very true.

Honestly, I'd say do whichever you feel like doing.
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Zera
But imagine breeding my boost defects together *^*
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Pain
I know<.> I just don't know what to do lol. I planned on remaking someone already so I don't know <.>
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Mag

True, true. But I mean, it couldn't hurt to have two right?
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Mag@
An if you keep male you get free breedings to the many ladies
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Making a paper therian mask right now nailed the caracal ears!
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I'm just conflicted <.> I already have a decent boost defect stud
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If you make female you'll just get endless free breedings to Shade
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Mag

Honestly, I'd keep male. That could be a solid stud for you and bring in some serious mushies.
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BJake

I love them all. The theme is 10/10
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Make female or keep male?
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Ya'll look at my pretty Albino wolves
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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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