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Myth, just multiply six by nine hundred
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I cant figure out how much mush I need to buy 6 apples if the apples are 900 mush
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I saw it and it made me smile
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GG doodle! I love your wolf's name!
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Fog,
you should try to sell it
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Is a time dynamic coat puppy worth trying to sell or just save myself the trouble and retire stright away?
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Your wolves played: Lucifer peers around at some trees and towering brush, while leaping over dense patches of foliage.

how do you do all that at the same time?!?
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pvp anyone? my rank is so low right now
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Thank you! ;w; i was worried i overdid it on the wing markings but they're growing on me

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Pretty wolf! The swirl marking matches her coat so well :O
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My wifi is hating me again ;-;
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DG let the battle continue!! ^^
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I like blue crayons
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ok
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lets keep battling !
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hi pack

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Myth, just multiply six by nine hundred
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I cant figure out how much mush I need to buy 6 apples if the apples are 900 mush
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Luna,
Lol :3
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Doodle
I saw it and it made me smile
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Luna,
Thanks lol
 Luna❄
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PvP anyone?
 Luna❄
10:13:22 Silver (She/her)
GG doodle! I love your wolf's name!
 Doodle Dragon
10:12:31 Irish Gay Rat
Fog,
you should try to sell it
 Fog of War
10:11:26 Fog
Is a time dynamic coat puppy worth trying to sell or just save myself the trouble and retire stright away?
 maple leaf
10:11:24 
Hello

 Luna❄
10:08:13 Silver (She/her)
Your wolves played: Lucifer peers around at some trees and towering brush, while leaping over dense patches of foliage.

how do you do all that at the same time?!?
 Luna❄
10:06:34 Silver (She/her)
pvp anyone? my rank is so low right now
 Cybertronion
10:03:24 Cyber / Onion
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Thank you! ;w; i was worried i overdid it on the wing markings but they're growing on me

Myth

Pretty wolf! The swirl marking matches her coat so well :O
 VioletEcho
09:51:14 Is a dinosaur rawr
My wifi is hating me again ;-;
 VioletEcho
09:39:43 Is a dinosaur rawr
DG let the battle continue!! ^^
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hi
 Buttercup
09:38:06 
I like blue crayons
 Buttercup
09:36:40 
ok
 Darkgold
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Echo
lets keep battling !
 Buttercup
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hi pack




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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