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07:09:50 ET

Very, considering I woke up at 5am!

07:09:12 Reaper / Grim

ET
Long day? lol

07:08:51 ET

It is 1am and I am finally back at my flat, holy shit

07:06:39 Reaper / Grim

I can't figure out what this is missing (aside from the eye)
-Click-

07:06:12 katy | beetle

graves,
glad i could help ^^

06:58:17

Looking for another Rp partner or two. Please PM me.

06:57:13 Graves | Chaos

Distant
That's incredibly helpful, thank you!

Dusk
Very cute! And yes haha

06:52:26 katy | beetle

graves,
-Click-

does this help at all? don't mind how messy the sketches are xD

06:51:45 Jack, Boo, Vapor

What's the time limit for an unresponsive
pvp again?

06:51:27 Dusk (she/her)

my bad its not sideways lol

06:50:42 Dusk (she/her)

graves
something like this?
-Click-
(sorry itâs sideways, i tried)

06:48:49 Graves | Chaos

Ink
Stagger your dominance. Another thing that affects it is the affinity between your wolves

06:48:41

I think it's because a handful of your wolves all have the same dominance (zero).

Lunarborn Fangs

06:47:28 Ink/InkFoxy

how do i get my pack hapiness up? they're all fed and watered

06:42:21 Graves | Chaos

Distant
That might actually help a ton thank you!

06:42:08 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Pvp anyone?

06:41:56 katy | beetle

graves,
hm, i can sketch a few references for you quick if that'd help?

06:41:23 Graves | Chaos

Dusk
That's better than what I come up with xD

06:41:06 Graves | Chaos

Distant
Front facing. It's almost like a top view, but not?

06:40:37 Dusk (she/her)

whenever i try to draw wolves they end up looking like dog-cats :(

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07:09:50 ET

Very, considering I woke up at 5am!

07:09:12 Reaper / Grim

ET
Long day? lol

07:08:51 ET

It is 1am and I am finally back at my flat, holy shit

07:06:39 Reaper / Grim

I can't figure out what this is missing (aside from the eye)
-Click-

07:06:12 katy | beetle

graves,
glad i could help ^^

06:58:17

Looking for another Rp partner or two. Please PM me.

06:57:13 Graves | Chaos

Distant
That's incredibly helpful, thank you!

Dusk
Very cute! And yes haha

06:52:26 katy | beetle

graves,
-Click-

does this help at all? don't mind how messy the sketches are xD

06:51:45 Jack, Boo, Vapor

What's the time limit for an unresponsive
pvp again?

06:51:27 Dusk (she/her)

my bad its not sideways lol

06:50:42 Dusk (she/her)

graves
something like this?
-Click-
(sorry itâs sideways, i tried)

06:48:49 Graves | Chaos

Ink
Stagger your dominance. Another thing that affects it is the affinity between your wolves

06:48:41

I think it's because a handful of your wolves all have the same dominance (zero).

Lunarborn Fangs

06:47:28 Ink/InkFoxy

how do i get my pack hapiness up? they're all fed and watered

06:42:21 Graves | Chaos

Distant
That might actually help a ton thank you!

06:42:08 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Pvp anyone?

06:41:56 katy | beetle

graves,
hm, i can sketch a few references for you quick if that'd help?

06:41:23 Graves | Chaos

Dusk
That's better than what I come up with xD

06:41:06 Graves | Chaos

Distant
Front facing. It's almost like a top view, but not?

06:40:37 Dusk (she/her)

whenever i try to draw wolves they end up looking like dog-cats :(

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Isle of Gold - Comments

March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Lightbringer

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

Darkseeker

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

Lightbringer

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

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March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.

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March 24, 2024 08:33 PM

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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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