Wolf Play : Critique

07:36:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Auk
Good games, gotta go now

07:35:20 Pack of Sharp Snap

Blue Wolves
If you want to show off your wolf then please make sure they are not up for breeding or sale

07:25:45 Amy/Anpmygdala

Nillili Mambo sneaks up on ♧ Spread my Wings ◇ and scares them. ♧ Spread my Wings ◇ then chases Nillili Mambo for scaring them.

I have a bunch of idiots lol

07:24:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

Lady Mist was forced to sit in the corner for being rude to Blue Rose

I'm not surprised. Really takes after most of her family

07:19:24 Amy/Anpmygdala

Quick pvp anyone

07:17:25 Amy/Anpmygdala

Bjake
What about an animal that was created by stitching parts of ther animals?
Like bat wings dog head or any animal mix you'd prefear

07:07:10 Don't call me BJ.

Feral, Anthro, and humanoid are all up on my can draw table

07:06:49 Don't call me BJ.

Anyone have any good gorey/creepy valentines day YCH Ideas I could steal?

Desire of The Hills

07:05:58 Hills / Desire

Waking up and signing on to mail is always such a serotonin rush ugh I love it

Elm Tree Creek

06:38:17 Yukon

-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game

06:26:51 katy | beetle

forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky

Forest Dwelling

06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok

@katy

Ooo I love it!

06:19:14 katy | beetle

thank you <3

06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

distant
Pretty

06:17:28 katy | beetle

-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*

05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.

Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left

05:32:37 Graves | Chaos

Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(

05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.

@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself

05:16:28 Graves | Chaos

I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry

05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning

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07:36:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Auk
Good games, gotta go now

07:35:20 Pack of Sharp Snap

Blue Wolves
If you want to show off your wolf then please make sure they are not up for breeding or sale

07:25:45 Amy/Anpmygdala

Nillili Mambo sneaks up on ♧ Spread my Wings ◇ and scares them. ♧ Spread my Wings ◇ then chases Nillili Mambo for scaring them.

I have a bunch of idiots lol

07:24:25 Pack of Sharp Snap

Lady Mist was forced to sit in the corner for being rude to Blue Rose

I'm not surprised. Really takes after most of her family

07:19:24 Amy/Anpmygdala

Quick pvp anyone

07:17:25 Amy/Anpmygdala

Bjake
What about an animal that was created by stitching parts of ther animals?
Like bat wings dog head or any animal mix you'd prefear

07:07:10 Don't call me BJ.

Feral, Anthro, and humanoid are all up on my can draw table

07:06:49 Don't call me BJ.

Anyone have any good gorey/creepy valentines day YCH Ideas I could steal?

Desire of The Hills

07:05:58 Hills / Desire

Waking up and signing on to mail is always such a serotonin rush ugh I love it

Elm Tree Creek

06:38:17 Yukon

-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game

06:26:51 katy | beetle

forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky

Forest Dwelling

06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok

@katy

Ooo I love it!

06:19:14 katy | beetle

thank you <3

06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

distant
Pretty

06:17:28 katy | beetle

-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*

05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.

Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left

05:32:37 Graves | Chaos

Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(

05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.

@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself

05:16:28 Graves | Chaos

I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry

05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM