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04:54:31 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
That was very rude of her

04:54:21 katy | beetle

the pups did turn out quite pretty though, so at least i know it's a good pairing.

04:53:46 katy | beetle

i know right? after all the apples i've spent on her :')

04:53:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Nooooo
How could she ;-;

04:52:58 katy | beetle

she did indeed disappoint me

04:52:21 katy | beetle

thanks ^^ i'm gonna pop larkspur right now though, too impatient lol. hoping she doesn't disappoint

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04:50:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Good luck

04:49:17 katy | beetle

-Click-
another round of pregnant ladies. hopefully i get something other than duds >.>

04:42:43 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
You're welcome ^^

P'sky
Thinking is overrated

04:41:09 katy | beetle

amy,
i like zeno, might use that or think of a longer version so i can use zeno as a nickname ^-^ thanks!

04:39:38 P'Sky

Amy
I'm starting to think >>

04:38:30 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
To spite you XD

04:38:09 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Desmo
Tar
Zeno

04:37:00 P'Sky

Amy
My next thought

04:36:21 P'Sky

Why are you a boy
-WP Click-

04:36:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
Oh lol
Can you check on your phone maybee?

04:35:50 katy | beetle

-Click-
any name ideas? i'm stuck

04:35:40 P'Sky

Amy
I don't have live TV so it's a bit complicated xD

04:34:15 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Lmao lucky i guess XD

P'sky
Maybee that might be a good igea XD

04:29:46 P'Sky

Amy
All I see is my street.
Guess I should check out the news xD

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04:54:31 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
That was very rude of her

04:54:21 katy | beetle

the pups did turn out quite pretty though, so at least i know it's a good pairing.

04:53:46 katy | beetle

i know right? after all the apples i've spent on her :')

04:53:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Nooooo
How could she ;-;

04:52:58 katy | beetle

she did indeed disappoint me

04:52:21 katy | beetle

thanks ^^ i'm gonna pop larkspur right now though, too impatient lol. hoping she doesn't disappoint

-WP Click-

04:50:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Good luck

04:49:17 katy | beetle

-Click-
another round of pregnant ladies. hopefully i get something other than duds >.>

04:42:43 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
You're welcome ^^

P'sky
Thinking is overrated

04:41:09 katy | beetle

amy,
i like zeno, might use that or think of a longer version so i can use zeno as a nickname ^-^ thanks!

04:39:38 P'Sky

Amy
I'm starting to think >>

04:38:30 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
To spite you XD

04:38:09 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Desmo
Tar
Zeno

04:37:00 P'Sky

Amy
My next thought

04:36:21 P'Sky

Why are you a boy
-WP Click-

04:36:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
Oh lol
Can you check on your phone maybee?

04:35:50 katy | beetle

-Click-
any name ideas? i'm stuck

04:35:40 P'Sky

Amy
I don't have live TV so it's a bit complicated xD

04:34:15 Amy/Anpmygdala

Katy
Lmao lucky i guess XD

P'sky
Maybee that might be a good igea XD

04:29:46 P'Sky

Amy
All I see is my street.
Guess I should check out the news xD

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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