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11:51:25

is explore being massively laggy for anyone else? or am i just lucky lol

I can only move a few spaces before it freezes and I have to reload it

VioletEcho

11:48:06 Is a dinosaur rawr

Morning chat

FIAB

11:35:06 Do I need one?

Wait destis on hi I never am on when ur on

The Reaper

11:32:12 Reaper / Grim

Desti
Yikes, I'm sorry, feel that though. I only just now saw your message. As long as you know how to make them, homemade pretzels can be really good! 10/10 recommend

Emmet
👍👍 Sounds good

Continental Wolves

11:31:09 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Venn
Oh trust me I refuse to put in that much effort into food right now, I'll just make instant noodles but fancier

Vennenum

11:29:29 Venn/Venne

Instant noodles. Ramen takes hours. 😜

Sabbath

11:28:57 Rook

Ramen is acceptable at any time of day or night

Continental Wolves

11:28:37 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Should I make some ramen even though it's almost midnight?

Zeraphia

11:26:59 Space Pirate Captain

Rook

I think it's pretty good. I've watched... it a few times now

Sabbath

11:26:28 Rook

Ooh I've never heard of that one but my partner loves Transformers so now I will ask him to watch it with me :3
Thanks Zeraphia :o

Continental Wolves

11:25:55 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Grim
As much cheese as possible

Zeraphia

11:25:42 Space Pirate Captain

Hehehe yeah.

My dad originally got me into the old ones... and ugh... I'm hooked

Continental Wolves

11:25:34 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Oop I just saw your message, transformers are okay but are kinda boring

Winter Rose

11:25:00 Rose/wints

did I see mentioning transformers in chat?

The Reaper

11:24:49 Reaper / Grim

Emmet
I'll let ya know when they're done, want some cheese dip with it?

Continental Wolves

11:24:41 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
As long as it's not a romance comedy movie I'll watch it

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11:24:24 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Khaos
I honestly am not doing very well right now. I hope you are well though.

@Grim
Oooh. Pretzels sound really good right now.
I am currently multitasking four things, three if you don't count listening to music as one.
I am trying to distract myself from pain and stress.

Zeraphia

11:24:07 Space Pirate Captain

It's the ...
okay y'all.
It's the Transformer's One movie.
I enjoy it probably way too much.

Zeraphia

11:23:41 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

I mean, you could watch it too if you wanted. XD

Sabbath

11:23:29 Rook

what movie? :o

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11:51:25

is explore being massively laggy for anyone else? or am i just lucky lol

I can only move a few spaces before it freezes and I have to reload it

VioletEcho

11:48:06 Is a dinosaur rawr

Morning chat

FIAB

11:35:06 Do I need one?

Wait destis on hi I never am on when ur on

The Reaper

11:32:12 Reaper / Grim

Desti
Yikes, I'm sorry, feel that though. I only just now saw your message. As long as you know how to make them, homemade pretzels can be really good! 10/10 recommend

Emmet
👍👍 Sounds good

Continental Wolves

11:31:09 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Venn
Oh trust me I refuse to put in that much effort into food right now, I'll just make instant noodles but fancier

Vennenum

11:29:29 Venn/Venne

Instant noodles. Ramen takes hours. 😜

Sabbath

11:28:57 Rook

Ramen is acceptable at any time of day or night

Continental Wolves

11:28:37 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Should I make some ramen even though it's almost midnight?

Zeraphia

11:26:59 Space Pirate Captain

Rook

I think it's pretty good. I've watched... it a few times now

Sabbath

11:26:28 Rook

Ooh I've never heard of that one but my partner loves Transformers so now I will ask him to watch it with me :3
Thanks Zeraphia :o

Continental Wolves

11:25:55 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Grim
As much cheese as possible

Zeraphia

11:25:42 Space Pirate Captain

Hehehe yeah.

My dad originally got me into the old ones... and ugh... I'm hooked

Continental Wolves

11:25:34 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Oop I just saw your message, transformers are okay but are kinda boring

Winter Rose

11:25:00 Rose/wints

did I see mentioning transformers in chat?

The Reaper

11:24:49 Reaper / Grim

Emmet
I'll let ya know when they're done, want some cheese dip with it?

Continental Wolves

11:24:41 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
As long as it's not a romance comedy movie I'll watch it

Destinations End

11:24:24 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Zeraphia

11:24:07 Space Pirate Captain

It's the ...
okay y'all.
It's the Transformer's One movie.
I enjoy it probably way too much.

Zeraphia

11:23:41 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

I mean, you could watch it too if you wanted. XD

Sabbath

11:23:29 Rook

what movie? :o

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

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July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

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July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

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July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

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July 7, 2018 10:18 PM

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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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