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 The Night Walker
02:10:54 Anemoia/Aedra
:D
 The Night Walker
02:10:07 Anemoia/Aedra
Im- getting that fuckin sv-
 The Night Walker
02:09:45 Anemoia/Aedra
Oh?
 The Night Walker
02:09:37 Anemoia/Aedra
Tech
Oh, yeah, for sure!
 Caeruleum
02:09:21 Cae, Blue
:)

budget has a zero more
 Tech
02:09:00 
Night Rat
I'd say keep a eye out on Cae though
 The Night Walker
02:08:44 Anemoia/Aedra
Tech
Pftt-
 Tech
02:08:25 
Night Rat
On second thought I'll let you have it xD
 The Night Walker
02:08:21 Anemoia/Aedra
MuSh*
 The Night Walker
02:08:10 Anemoia/Aedra
3,500+*
 The Night Walker
02:07:57 Anemoia/Aedra
Tech
I have 3,00 much.
 Ecifircas
02:07:54 
Explorer's Maps do not cost apples - you can buy them from Barter for 30 mushrooms.
 Wolves Of The North
02:07:49 
Oh okay thanks everyone for your help
 Tech
02:07:44 
Night Rat
I'll use all 600 mush I have to get that
 The Night Walker
02:07:17 Anemoia/Aedra
Tech
Y e s
 Ecifircas
02:07:13 
If you can't find the undiscovered tiles or undefeated enemies, you can buy an Explorer's Map (Realm > Marketplace > Barter) for 30 mushrooms.

Use it when you are in an explore session and it will tell you where you still need to discover (undiscovered tiles will be in grey) and undefeated enemies (undefeated enemies will be on the map as an 'X').
 The Night Walker
02:07:07 Anemoia/Aedra
North
They're 30 in barter?
 Tech
02:07:00 
Night Rat
You really want that SV in Free Range
 Wolves Of The North
02:06:27 
Ok. But currently they're for apples and they're too expensive
 The Night Walker
02:05:58 Anemoia/Aedra
North
If you're saying you get stuck on the squares then go backwards.

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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