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 Saint
07:39:41 
i do have 8+ bald eagle feathers because of these quest so thats a bonus i guess...
 DojejeTheWolf
07:39:10 Dojeje
Anything I can do to improve this other than the random color spots? I did this on sketchpad and it's hard to do anything on there.
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 Ryujin
07:38:25 Elduin (he, Him)
hello chat
 Existence
07:36:00 Exist / Kuskyn
They are just a figment of your imagination xD
 Saint
07:35:17 
im learning that elk in mountains must have a high flee rate ugh this is annoying lmao
also big horned sheep dont exist im convinced lmao
 Existence
07:31:31 Exist / Kuskyn
Oh my I have that one too ever since getting it my luck for finding one has been zilch too. I had 4 of them before getting the quest x.x
 Saint
07:28:44 
oh yeah, the quest that i get stuck on are the scavenger hunts but thankfully i passed them, now im just struggling to get a scarab beetle but not from explore but theres none in market so i ended up having to explore (and i have no luck lmaooo)
 Existence
07:26:52 Exist / Kuskyn
Oo that is super lucky; I keep getting craft quests xD So I have my art to thank for my earnings c.c
 Saint
07:24:57 
honestly between quest and explore, my profits are getting to a point where apples actually exist for me lmao
 Existence
07:23:27 Exist / Kuskyn
-WP Click-
I'm praying that he gives me some SV pups T-T I would like to help my friends get their dominance back up after death script it t.t
 StarClan
07:23:00 Star, your Beluga
I think Prime Video posted the first episode on youtube, maybe or maybe not..
 icemoons
07:22:48 slushy,ice,moon,
bye star
 StarClan
07:22:31 Star, your Beluga
Ah I don't like the reprise one for some reason, cool!


Oh great I need to go to school, bye ya'll..
 icemoons
07:22:04 slushy,ice,moon,
that show is awesome but season 2 is not coming for like a year and a half
 Existence
07:21:45 Exist / Kuskyn
That is so true, I won't lie if it was more helpful to my earnings I'd probably offer my girls but SV breeding c.c
 icemoons
07:21:42 slushy,ice,moon,
star

more then anything and more then anything reprise
 StarClan
07:20:53 Star, your Beluga
Ice,
Which one? Hell's Greatest Dad was stuck in mine earlier.
 icemoons
07:20:18 slushy,ice,moon,
I have Hazbin hotel songs stuck in my head
 Saint
07:19:58 
oh lmao, i got 3 new pups last night (thank you vox) and i might make then all females for breeding, as its easier to find a male for breeding than a female to breed to and get pups from another player
 Existence
07:18:51 Exist / Kuskyn
It might be yeah xD The sv market is a little lacking at the moment high demand and not many wolves available ^^; I am not helping that I think I bought like 6 or so today..

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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