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 Zeraphia
02:38:18 Vah stalks forums
Dart

Oh of course!

Mine... is not XD
 The Amethyst
02:37:49 Dart
Zera

I think mines good enough :D
 Zeraphia
02:36:33 Vah stalks forums
I need to figure out a halloween pfp for my stuff.
 Sabbath
02:31:46 Rook
i have halloween decorations year round
 Caeruleum
02:31:36 Cae, Blue
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somu <333
 Hallow's Eve
02:30:45 Hallow, Eve
I have had halloween decorations since Sept. 1st
 starmutt
02:29:35 marsh | they/it
as soon as halloween ends you've got 364 days till halloween

never too late never too early
 Hugs4Bugs
02:29:27 (he/they)
ayooo
 Sabbath
02:28:53 Rook
it is spooky season
 Delight
02:28:44 Misty
it is never too early for spooky season
 Hugs4Bugs
02:27:19 (he/they)
is it too early for spooky season?
 Hugs4Bugs
02:26:43 (he/they)
I just made my dog my avatar, but it's approaching spooky season, so I'm debating putting this there instead
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 Caeruleum
02:24:57 Cae, Blue
winning the leuc for you i guess <.<
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 Tech
02:21:54 
No leuc for me now you two distracted me
 Zeraphia
02:20:35 Vah stalks forums
Tea!

I mean, I'm not saying I am--but I won't deny it. XD

How are you??
 Caeruleum
02:20:10 Cae, Blue
sv thats excellent with me? thats rare
 The Tea Drinkers
02:19:54 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
don't tempt me >:(
 Caeruleum
02:19:40 Cae, Blue
shouldnt have brought it to my attention :P
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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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