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I would ask for the chimmy cause, well, yeah, but I do not have den space 😞
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Rogue, I've gotten a chimera, black phase, crooked tail, 3 melas and a viti 4 no xD
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I don't want Sv pups apparently I want defect pups..
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Hollow,
Many people suffer from anxiety and know how to deal with it. I do.
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Already tormenting the pups I see :)
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That's a really weird and kinda concerning way to start a conversation. Maybe next time leave that "I'm an expert on anxiety" out of your message?
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hi guys, Prudy Im an expert on anxiety, take some deep breaths, what time are you going to get the boot off?
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Sounds about right lol. I plan to bread my DH and SV boosts together but I doubt I'll get either boost often
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I'm getting off my boot today and they might have to rebreak my foot:p
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I bred TWO ExW and ExH and Obedient wolves and they failed to produce me a ExW OR ExH
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It gives you motivation to go and do the quests. before, I just explored and hope I finished a quest
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I put myself up in the leaves game so you can see :)

Yeah, I like the update too! So many tokens for the halloween boost in wolf part haha
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they changed quests? I like the new version

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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