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 Existence
07:31:31 Exist / Kuskyn
Oh my I have that one too ever since getting it my luck for finding one has been zilch too. I had 4 of them before getting the quest x.x
 Saint
07:28:44 
oh yeah, the quest that i get stuck on are the scavenger hunts but thankfully i passed them, now im just struggling to get a scarab beetle but not from explore but theres none in market so i ended up having to explore (and i have no luck lmaooo)
 Existence
07:26:52 Exist / Kuskyn
Oo that is super lucky; I keep getting craft quests xD So I have my art to thank for my earnings c.c
 Saint
07:24:57 
honestly between quest and explore, my profits are getting to a point where apples actually exist for me lmao
 Existence
07:23:27 Exist / Kuskyn
-WP Click-
I'm praying that he gives me some SV pups T-T I would like to help my friends get their dominance back up after death script it t.t
 StarClan
07:23:00 Star, your Beluga
I think Prime Video posted the first episode on youtube, maybe or maybe not..
 icemoons
07:22:48 slushy,ice,moon,
bye star
 StarClan
07:22:31 Star, your Beluga
Ah I don't like the reprise one for some reason, cool!


Oh great I need to go to school, bye ya'll..
 icemoons
07:22:04 slushy,ice,moon,
that show is awesome but season 2 is not coming for like a year and a half
 Existence
07:21:45 Exist / Kuskyn
That is so true, I won't lie if it was more helpful to my earnings I'd probably offer my girls but SV breeding c.c
 icemoons
07:21:42 slushy,ice,moon,
star

more then anything and more then anything reprise
 StarClan
07:20:53 Star, your Beluga
Ice,
Which one? Hell's Greatest Dad was stuck in mine earlier.
 icemoons
07:20:18 slushy,ice,moon,
I have Hazbin hotel songs stuck in my head
 Saint
07:19:58 
oh lmao, i got 3 new pups last night (thank you vox) and i might make then all females for breeding, as its easier to find a male for breeding than a female to breed to and get pups from another player
 Existence
07:18:51 Exist / Kuskyn
It might be yeah xD The sv market is a little lacking at the moment high demand and not many wolves available ^^; I am not helping that I think I bought like 6 or so today..
 Saint
07:17:08 
thank you! im thinking about trying to keep one SV pf every age (so 15 at least) at all times but that might be difficult lol
 Existence
07:13:21 Exist / Kuskyn
Oh I wish you luck! I have 25 almost 26k dom It's a little difficult to maintain when your wolves start getting old without you realising how their weeks go so fast ;-;
 Saint
07:12:02 
yeah i used to buy so much space every chance but then i stopped myself and im about to start up again, im hopping to get dom above 10k
 Existence
07:09:05 Exist / Kuskyn
I only have the one folder I wish I could get more but I would rather spend the apples on spaces xD For more SV wolves.
 Saint
07:07:59 
ohh yeah im starting my sv hoard again too, thanks for reminding me lmao. i really need more folders but they are so expensive for me lmao

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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