Chatbox
 Qyusen
09:27:55 Qyu - all pronouns
-Click-
I made a quick animation
 Boeing
09:23:22 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Wind
Yeah lmao
Some of my pieces i just kind of give up on chords and it just stays in one chord for like twenty or so bars like a classical piece xD

It's the kneecap stealer :o
 Continental Wolves
09:22:20 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
It's a person with 1 kneecap :0
 Windcrest
09:21:44 Wind, Lavender
Boe

I get that -- I do that too haha. Chord changes are annoying- I remember doing part writing a lot for theory classes
 Boeing
09:20:04 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Wind
... honestly whatever I feel like doing lmao
Sometimes I get tasks I need to do so yeah
I hate writing chord changes <.> that's my greatest weakness because... yeah lmao


Red
Fine. e.e
 Forest Dwelling
09:19:50 I am on Wolflocke ok
Votes?
-WP Click-
 Red River Wolves
09:18:26 Redd Dead
Pizza,
Prepare.
 Frozen Mist
09:17:57 Frozen - Mist
-WP Click-

FMC doing her CP well. :D
 Windcrest
09:17:07 Wind, Lavender
Boe

Lol Sibelius isn't free so I never used it >.< But that's so cool! What do you usually compose lol
 Boeing
09:15:23 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Red
But- :P

Wind
Ooh that's nice lol
Musescore over Sibelius honestly
I do that too, kind of why I have it xD
 distant-lands
09:14:21 katy | beetle
finally drawing beetle some new art for the first time in months :>
 Windcrest
09:14:16 Wind, Lavender
Boe

Yeah of course! Musescore is a great composing software :D I occasionally compose haha
 Red River Wolves
09:14:11 Redd Dead
Pizza,
You took Amy's brain. Prepare.
 Boeing
09:12:33 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Wind
Yeah I just sketched it in lol
You use musescore too? o.o

Dove
well you'll get thee eventually lol
 Frozen Mist
09:11:40 Frozen - Mist
>.> Of course I could not get this litter to be just duds. <.<
 Windcrest
09:09:44 Wind, Lavender
Boe

Besides the small trill in the beginning that you may have missed, I think it looks good! Also love how you're using Musescore haha
 Frozen Mist
09:09:41 Frozen - Mist
Boing,
I will try my best lol. XD
 Boeing
09:08:36 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Dove
... good luck lmao
Not too sure what she's planning this FMC

Red
But it wasn't me ;-;

Wind
I'm thinking... some thing along the lines of this maybe?
-Click-
 Windcrest
09:05:39 Wind, Lavender
Boe

Right I see I see- if you don't hold it all the way it shouldn't make a huge difference I feel like
 Red River Wolves
09:04:08 Redd Dead
Pizza,
But when you disrespect RDR2, you leave me no choice. Prepare.

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.
Quests
Alliance Battles
Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances
Coyote : -3
Death Adder : -5
Vicuna Wolf : -2
    Winter   Night   Blizzard  Moon: 
 


Forums

→ Wolf Play is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following
Forums > Artwork > Art Help
   1    2    3 

Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:34 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738046
Give Award
Hello! I was working on a semi realistic piece, and I wanted some critique of it! If you have any hints on where it could be improved to look more realistic , I would be so thankful!! Thanks!!

https://image.ibb.co/cC7q7o/33845_CD1_1_BE6_4586_86_C7_26_AF68_A26_C54.png
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:37 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738057
Give Award
Maybe expand the car side of dogs head up. ^^
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:37 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738058
Give Award
I loves the fur (its much better than I can do) but double check your anatomy. Also, the dog is way to skinny. But it's really cute! I can tell you have a lot of potential.
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:38 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738062
Give Award
I love it!
Id suggest making the body a bit thicker and getting rid of the tongue(or repositioning it). Also, add some life to the dog's eyes if possible.

Unless it is a really small dog, that bunny isn't gonna be that big. Unless it is a giant bunny. I love it, but it isn't realistic ^^

That's all, really :D

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:39 PM by Astrophel
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:39 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738064
Give Award
I'm not great with canines, but I'm great with rabbits. The rabbit's nose is a V like shape, quite different from that of a dog's. And the nose isn't very pink, just a slight blush.

Here is my bunny


https://s15.postimg.cc/sqla5gf1n/3_F5_AE822-_E4_AD-43_BA-94_F0-3_C92_A48_CB008.jpg
(C) me

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:40 PM by Damian Wayne
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:39 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738066
Give Award
Thanks everyone! I'll post some updates once I'm done
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:47 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738085
Give Award
Also little note, it's supposed to be a puppy :D
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:53 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738102
Give Award
https://image.ibb.co/mAxnL8/D42_FD071_0750_47_F5_8_AF0_3_F6_BC1_EA99_FB.png

Updated! I think it's better, but the eyes...

Anyone know how to add life?
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:55 PM


Destinations End

Game Moderator
Neutral
 
Posts: 12231
#738110
Give Award
Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?
At least maybe a bit brighter.
That could give it some life to the eyes

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:56 PM by Destinations End
Help me make this look more realistic/ better!June 11, 2018 10:56 PM


Former Pack

Neutral
 
Posts: 0
#738113
Give Award


Destinations End said:
Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?
At least maybe a bit brighter.
That could give it some life to the eyes


Thanks! Adding

Forums > Artwork > Art Help
   1    2    3 

Refresh










Copyright ©2013-2025 Go Go Gatsby Designs, LLC    All Rights Reserved
Terms Of Use  |   Privacy Policy   |   DMCA   |   Contact Us