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I love the pose! It looks so cute and cozy! I think maybe just adding a bit more of a lighter-ish color to the log so you can have a little bit more shadow from the wolf? 
(C)85543 just in case... uhm, yeah. Felines... I'm not great yet. |
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Very cool posing. The colors go good together. That the lineart tho is like perfect One of my very few digitals |
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Please remember to also add something the pack can improve on! This is an improvement-centred game. First off, I love the colour choice. The subtle shift in the shade of blue for the head crest is super neat, and the purple/pink of the ear still has a lot of blue tones in it that keeps the overall piece really cohesive. Nothing is jarringly out of place and the colours compliment each other nicely. I can see this piece is likely meant to have a more simplistic style and the lineless art fits with this really nicely. I'd maybe make the eye a dark blue or purple rather than pitch black and the tooth a pale blue. The saturation and lack of colours in those two features stand out a little much. I'd maybe add some highlights to the eye too! - This piece is still WIP :0 the second character isn't painted yet.  [c]157083 |
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I really don't know what you expect me to say here. Amazing amazing amazing composition, colors and background!
Minor detail, I think the left wing is slightly longer than the right wing, and doesn't quite appear to be closer, although that might just me.
Also, the ocean looks stunning, but maybe you could add some texture and glistening of the waves on top? not gonna lie it looks pretty still right now which doesn't make sense. Sorry if it's just another wip part :p
it's not finished sorry :,) |
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Honestly love this piece :) I absolutely adore the techinque with the shading/details of the clothing- makes me want to eat it up. Don't even get me started on the hair as well- beautiful shading/lighting! ONLY thing I could give critque on s that the pose just seems a little stiff is all. I think it may be because the legs/feet are pointing one way but the torso seems to be facing straight onwards!  This is the only thing I've drawn in 8 months lol. Be as harsh as you can, I want to improve. |
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Oh my god! I love snakes! Good Job! |
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Willow, please reread the game rules and use the other posts as reference. You need to post both a good thing and something to improve on. |
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Bringing this back up. Kat, I honestly love that expression. It gives me that vibe of like; oh I def messed up and Imma pay for it. I think the only thing that could really make it "better" could be some scale-like texture along the body! Yeah. 
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What a delicate and enamoured pose! The character expressions are great and the overall posing and spacing between the characters creates a really intimate vibe! There's so many subtle details that really emphasises the relationship between the two characters. I'd maybe push the shading a little further, as it appears a little diffused and it's difficult to tell what direction the light is coming from. I'd put some more shadows underneath the raised wing that fall on both characters. Something like this to really create the impression of them being sheltered/underneath the wing! - Have a crack at this recent piece * ^* [c]157083  |
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Oh, I looove the lighting choice! That color palette is so easy on the eyes, and it really adds a nice level of depth to the mood that more neutral colors might sully. One thing I would recommend is lineart weight - your lineart is the same width all the way through, and thinning out the lines in some places and thickening them in others will add a lot of variety and flow to the character. :>
Here's my most recent finished piece! Apologies if it's a little blurry, this thing is huge so I had to do a bit of resizing lol.
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