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 Amygdala
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Ky
The wolves will find a way to make you lose apples XD

Everytime i go all out on a litter with apple items it's a fail
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 kycantina
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Amy, I swear I better be winning that apple back with how much stress it's caused me
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Questin do fishing rods finsh at ro?
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Anubis
Lmao...i am not the one to come after you XD

I make mistakes every day
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Sorry howlers XD
 Amygdala
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Anubis
Bowlers?
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I'd have to finsh my litters before I could worry about wrestling my highest wolves are on 51 hours Xad
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Thank you tor reminding me I think I need some more bowlers
 Amygdala
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I would guess it's ky XD
 Everlasting Torment
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Oh no XD
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Amy
Nice

Most of mines wolves cover in blood with wired names
 kycantina
04:19:27 ky but it's spooky
Guess who didn't time her wrestling litter right and is now scrambling to buy a cranberry ;-;
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Blood
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He is pretty...here is my blodd covered boy XD
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Your wolves played: Did you taste my blood growls and attacks are you bloodly crazys rump.
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Paws?
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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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