Wolf Play : Critique?

05:31:51 Amy/Anpmygdala

Techno
To be honest i didn't even realised ustill you pointed it out

05:29:30 Blue, Dusk

i havent played this game forever i need a penpal . who volunteers as tribute ?

05:28:59 Blue, Dusk

im having no luck . Why did i do these things . I think two of my females will have there litter at the same time but the rest are pretty spaced out , so atleast ill have time to get rid of the wolves im not interested in keeping .

05:28:58 Semi-hiatus

not me misspelling choked ;-;

05:27:50 Ember

well deserved lol

05:23:33 Semi-hiatus

just nearly chocked seeing a video of a danish politician saying verbatim 'trump fuck off' XD

05:21:18 Ember

another great one!

I really miss how movies used to be

05:20:39 Mr Palette Guy

I haven't watched mulan in years pfft.
I avoided most Disney movies
Watched beauty and the beast a shit ton though

05:20:10 Amy/Anpmygdala

Techno
Gosh how could i forget about mulan

05:19:26 Semi-hiatus

mulan has some amazing music too

05:19:07 Ember

oh really? I love that movie XD

05:17:48 Mr Palette Guy

I don't think I've watched tarzan lmao

05:16:46 Ember

songs from that movie are amazing. and Tarzan

05:15:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

I have another song to put in the mix
It's not disney but songs from spirit stallion of cimmaron hit different

05:13:19 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles,
It's too good of a song to only deserve the beginning of the movie

05:12:21 Amy/Anpmygdala

Spirit
This one hits hard i love it too

05:11:53 Semi-hiatus

Spirit

yes frozen heart is the ice song and I love it

05:11:48 Mr Palette Guy

Amy, fuck yeah, that songs on while I clean the house now

05:11:19 Amy/Anpmygdala

You guys talking about the frozen heart XD
-YT Click-

05:10:58 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles, the ice song? It was like the only reason I let BJake make me watch the movie haha

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05:31:51 Amy/Anpmygdala

Techno
To be honest i didn't even realised ustill you pointed it out

05:29:30 Blue, Dusk

i havent played this game forever i need a penpal . who volunteers as tribute ?

05:28:59 Blue, Dusk

05:28:58 Semi-hiatus

not me misspelling choked ;-;

05:27:50 Ember

well deserved lol

05:23:33 Semi-hiatus

just nearly chocked seeing a video of a danish politician saying verbatim 'trump fuck off' XD

05:21:18 Ember

another great one!

I really miss how movies used to be

05:20:39 Mr Palette Guy

I haven't watched mulan in years pfft.
I avoided most Disney movies
Watched beauty and the beast a shit ton though

05:20:10 Amy/Anpmygdala

Techno
Gosh how could i forget about mulan

05:19:26 Semi-hiatus

mulan has some amazing music too

05:19:07 Ember

oh really? I love that movie XD

05:17:48 Mr Palette Guy

I don't think I've watched tarzan lmao

05:16:46 Ember

songs from that movie are amazing. and Tarzan

05:15:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

I have another song to put in the mix
It's not disney but songs from spirit stallion of cimmaron hit different

05:13:19 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles,
It's too good of a song to only deserve the beginning of the movie

05:12:21 Amy/Anpmygdala

Spirit
This one hits hard i love it too

05:11:53 Semi-hiatus

Spirit

yes frozen heart is the ice song and I love it

05:11:48 Mr Palette Guy

Amy, fuck yeah, that songs on while I clean the house now

05:11:19 Amy/Anpmygdala

You guys talking about the frozen heart XD
-YT Click-

05:10:58 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles, the ice song? It was like the only reason I let BJake make me watch the movie haha

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM