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03:06:49 Vi, Echo, Aria

Redd lol relatable
I should go try find it, fingers crossed I can watch It from south africa

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Polar

Oooh that's fun! Coding is both a blessing and a curse. If it works well, beautiful. If it doesn't? ... just burn it.

02:59:46 Chro (he/him)

Zera -
IT! So a whole lot of programming for a few months before I graduate :'D

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02:58:57 Redd Dead

Echo,
It released in the US in May but I was waiting for it to start streaming then forgot lol

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Polar

Ahh, yeah. School starting up is fun. You'll have to remind me because my memory is trash, what is your major again?

02:58:00 Chro (he/him)

Zera -
Ahhh that's a relief :D hope it continues that way!
Oo I'm doing alright, mostly just sleeping, eating, drawing and playing games LOL,, but I gotta make the most out of these last few days before school starts again hehe

02:57:51 Leaf she/her

DarkAngel rakes the ground with their paws.
You are channeling my HH male right now you are adorable!

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BJake

Of course! I always love seeing your art pop up. ^^

02:57:22 Don't call me BJ.

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Thank you so much! :D

02:57:05 Vi, Echo, Aria

Redd
Oo nice! I can't remember if I watched the movie or not xD

02:56:44 Sickly Vah

Polar

Feeling better than I was! How are you doing?

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Zera! How are youu?

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Polar!

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Hiya guys :D

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02:54:56 Redd Dead

Echo,
That reminds me, I still need to watch the movie

02:54:36 Leaf she/her

Okay Amy I have matted black fur I can not use do you know If anyone would like it?

02:53:28 Amy/Anpmygdala

Leaf
Nah, i don't care about seeds

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BJake

Oooh that looks amazing!

02:51:03 Vi, Echo, Aria

Redd yes it is ^^
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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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