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 Amygdala
03:44:21 Amy/Anpmygdala
Okay gotta poof for a little bit

Be back soon
 Amygdala
03:43:31 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
Fir beeing close to italy i have been there maybee 3 times lol
 teddy
03:38:47 its yellow
amy ahh cool!
 Amygdala
03:36:50 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
Around the coastal region
Like 5 minutes from italy lol
 teddy
03:35:11 its yellow
amy
ahh good to hear! theres always more time :). where are you from?
 Amygdala
03:34:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
I wish i could ride too. Maybee next year ;)

I don't really like hiking but we went to lake bled with school for 5 days and visited most of the mountains near it XD
The view is amazing
 teddy
03:31:55 its yellow
amy
yes! a childhood friend of mine lways goes riding in slovenia too, so i'd like to do that somewhere!
 Quasar Hoarder
03:31:47 Quasar, QH
Vilk
I do!
 Amygdala
03:31:10 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
Oooh lol XD
Yeah lake bled is nice and plenty of mountains to go around XD
 Amygdala
03:30:34 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
Sounds fun XD

I ment in slovenia, what do you want to see?
 teddy
03:30:30 its yellow
amy
i love hiking so in the mountains basically. i'd love to see lake bled too
 Eagle's Sorrow
03:30:26 eagle, they/them
Gotta go. Bye guys! Seeya later!<3
 teddy
03:29:56 its yellow
oh whoops i misunderstood
 Eagle's Sorrow
03:29:56 eagle, they/them
Teddy

Oh, yeah, it is pretty. In my hometown, we do gangs in the summer ( like chilling gangs where we talk and whatever)
 teddy
03:29:43 its yellow
amy
my parents live in mainland europe so i am heading there for christmas!
 Amygdala
03:28:52 Amy/Anpmygdala
Teddy
Really 😅
What were you looking to visit?
 teddy
03:28:18 its yellow
i have to go to the airport in an hour :p
 teddy
03:28:03 its yellow
amy
wow!! i've always wanted to visit slovenia
 teddy
03:27:43 its yellow
but i'd love to visit estonia! i've heard that the coastline is beautiful
 Vilkas
03:27:42 Vilk
Does anyone here play horse eden? :)

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

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kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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